Hi, We like the general concepts for 67 and 68. For both we would like to see:
For the #68 concept, We would like to see the colors reversed - with the outside black, and the S in both silver or gold. For the black - it should be crisp and clear - not graded color. The gold/silver should also be bright and so it doesn't appear brown/grey.
For the text, "Aschettino" and "LLP" should be in black. Struhs should be in Gold/Silver respectively.
For #67, we would also like to see this in Black and Silver/Gold (same comments as for #68).
For #120, the gold should look brighter and have the same shining effect as #123.
For both, we would like to see the following variations: (1) logo on top, (2) line beneath text (instead of to the left) ending in LLP, (3) LLP vertical at the end, (4) no space between Aschettino and Struhs; (5) simpler fonts.