Thanks for reviewing my concepts: I think less is more, in keeping with the building design, a clean, functional (and slick) type treatment, accompanied with an integrated mountain motif gives a modern and stylish edge to the logo. #17 — the cut out of rust test.
Whoa - #18 is a FANTASTIC design. I need to rank it up there! Everything here feels a little too familiar though. What can you do to mix it up a bit? Maybe more stylish - more risky? More high style? A little more up-and-to-the-right movement? You totally "GET" this design - how the pieces would stay in place when cut out of steel, the movement, etc. I'd just love to see MORE. What do you think? THANK YOU! - Rich
Hey Rich, thank you for the feedback! — yes, you’re spot on, needs some tuning, reworking. Good to know the groundwork is on the right track I'll revisit your photos for inspiration and come back.
You know, #126 is probably the best geometry for the house/roof. Love the vertical "at" - cool touch Maybe take #126 and add the mountains (maybe you did and I missed it - if so sorry) - not sure that's not too much just thinking we should consider before final. And then we need to look at typefaces without making you work unnecessarily hard.
#174 / #175 — a new concept which has come about by melding some earlier ideas — less is more sort of idea. Accentuating the angle and lift to the right.
* I removed a couple of entries (one ranked 4) because I found out that I had created something very similar to another entrant's design, so I felt it best to steer in another direction.