I really love the clean, clear shape of this design. It has a sense of movement to it that I would like to retain. Can I see what it would look like if the tip of the "A" was extended even farther up to give a sense of an even bigger reaching? I love the idea of the figure reaching up, but also looking upwards, as well. Also, can you play with the colors a bit? I'd love to see this with gradations of vibrant blue into a turquoise/teal color. Deeper color toward the bottom, lighter as the eye goes up. This is so cool- I love it!
the spiraling feel I want to keep. Just one figure, I think. With the suggestion of two figures it feels like romantic connection instead of artistic connection.
Really like the organic feel of this one, and the colors. To my eyes, the figures seem to be facing away from each other and I would prefer them facing towards each other. Maybe the swoops could cross, spiraling.
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I like using the "I" for the logo portion - lends itself to upward moving images.
This particular one doesn't have much movement, though. curves and arcs moving upward