I like the silver and tourquoise and the swoop shapes are good suggestions of movement. Our mission is also about expression from within - can the spiraling shapes be connected to the figure, rather than framing it?
I would like to see the figure with more movement - reaching more, or including some asymmetry. longer lines, maybe crossing over from one side to the next - with and without the sprialing being present in the figure itself.
The figure feels more like a child than a dancer, though. I do like the simplicity of this one.
I like the use of a small circle to suggest an abstract figure. The larger circle isn't necessary and feels confining to me. I like the idea of yin-yang, but movement is more a priority.
The swooping shapes are good - try longer, more continuous arcs...?
I like the concept of this, but I wonder if there is a way to incorporate more of the upward motion? Can an upward spiraling motion be integrated somehow?
I like the concept of this, but I wonder if there is a way to incorporate more of the upward motion? Can an upward spiraling motion be integrated somehow?
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I would like to see the figure with more movement - reaching more, or including some asymmetry. longer lines, maybe crossing over from one side to the next - with and without the sprialing being present in the figure itself.
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Cool. This is an improvement in the circular emblem. I would like to see the swoop spiral more. Maybe even spiral around the figure?
Bolder colors - less pastel.
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Bolder colors - less pastel.
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The figure feels more like a child than a dancer, though. I do like the simplicity of this one.
I like the use of a small circle to suggest an abstract figure. The larger circle isn't necessary and feels confining to me. I like the idea of yin-yang, but movement is more a priority.
The swooping shapes are good - try longer, more continuous arcs...?
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