1) Please try the stylized "A" in entry #46 over lettering in entry #94. 2) Add color to the accent lines beside the slogan for entry #94 and #46, similar to the colored slogan accent lines in entry #95. 3) Try to change the "A" in entry #46 into a stylized music note. A suggestion would be an "eighth note" or a "sixteenth note" where the stem of the note is the right leg of the "A." If you maintain the perforations along the stem, this would incorporate all the elements of the studio in 1 image: a) the "eighth note" would incorporate the music, the perforations along the film indicates the video aspects, in the form of an "A" representing Arommet, overlying a globe which would shows the potential market reach.
Please change the solid bars on either side of the slogan in entry #128, into the tapered bars similar to entry #125. Also, the musical note on entry #116 should be reversed where the film effect is on the "stem" of the note and not the "flag" of the note. But see if you can shape it into something that resembles an "A" as in entry #128. Here's an idea, if you change to central "hole" in the "A" in entry #128 to where the thickness of the stem is consistent throughout (this being the right side of the "A"), and thin the left leg just a bit (this being the left side of the "A"), it will look more like a musical note. Thanks again.
So far, so good. Please make the horizontal line of the "A" as thin as the left leg of the "A". In other words, the bottom line of the "A" crossbar will be the same, but the top of that crossbar will be lower, thereby making the opening of the "A" larger, and the line itself thinner. Let me know if I need to elaborate more. Also, can you place the "perforations" along the right border of the "A" so that it looks more like its sitting along a flat surface --- like a piece of film. Thanks.
# 151, 152 and 153 plz... just signing off now...most welcome for further modifications/revisions....i will do that asap as soon as i log in. regards..
Looking better! Try two more levels of thickness on the horizontal line of the "A." The location of the perforations on the "A" in entry #149 look fine. They just do not appear to be sitting on the surface of the "A" like it was a flat surface.
Awesome! Hopefully final few changes ... 1) Add 1 more level of thickness to the horizontal bar of the "A" in entry #163 and #164. 2) Change the color of the word "studios" in entry #163 to silver. 3) The biggest issue I have with the perforations is that they appear "stuck" on the "A." In other words, the "A" shows a one point perspective, but the perforations look 2D because they don't share the same one point perspective as the "A" itself.
sorry to say but i am unable to understand instruction no. 3
"The biggest issue I have with the perforations is that they appear "stuck" on the "A." In other words, the "A" shows a one point perspective, but the perforations look 2D because they don't share the same one point perspective as the "A" itself."
No worries, almost done. I'll try again. I do like the shadows you placed on the small squares of entry #169 because it gives the appearance of depth. We can incorporate that in all subsequent revisions. The white squares on the film look 2 dimensional because they are completely square. This is in contrast to the "A" itself, which appears 3 dimensional not only because of the width of the figure, but the fact that the right leg of the "A" is larger, making it appear closer, and the left leg of the "A" is smaller, making it appears farther away. A suggestion would be to make the right side of the small squares larger, thereby making it appear closer like the right leg of the "A", and the left side of the small squares should be smaller, making this edge appear farther away, thereby completing the illusion of 3 dimensions for this figure. If you can incorporate this one change into entries #163, #167, and #169, it would be great. Let me know if I need to elaborate more. Thanks.
Good job. You got it! Entry #171 appears to be the closest. That can be the final template. If you make the white dots line up slightly more perpendicular to the axis of the right leg of the "A", and taper the spots slightly less, that should do it. After you make those small changes, please superimpose over entry #167 as well. Thanks!
sure sir, i will revise it asap.. but i made that dots parallel to the right border of right leg of 'A'.. if i made it more perpendicular it will no more parellel to the right border of right leg of 'A'. anyways i try to incorporate your inputs as much as i understood. regards..
Awesome! We're in home stretch, just a couple of more small tweaks. These will be superimposed over entry # 179. 1) Please make the left border of the last white dot, parallel to the right leg of the "A", making it appear that it travels with the leg of the "A". 2) Shrink the size of the white dot at the top ever so slightly to also make it appear that it recedes like the top of the "A". 3) Keep the white of the dots no lighter than the brightest part of the globe itself. 4) Brighten the top of the "A" slightly. 5) Please make the tagline a little bolder like the no. 2 ranked entry. Not sure if its a question of thickness, font size or both. Thanks.
Final changes (?) 1) Fifth white dot looks slightly small in the progression. 2) Can you do anything about the left side of the right leg of the "A" so that it doesn't blend with the map beneath. 3) After the above changes, please place over the other font in entry #175. Then upload a blue version of both so I can compare oranges to oranges. Thanks again. You've been awesome!
Beautiful! Can you move the "chrome effect" on "Arommet" from the top of the logo on entry #190 and #191, slightly lower on the lettering, as it is in entry #159. Makes it easier to read. Thanks.
You did it! Now we just need to decide which one. Can you give us entry #192, #193, #194, and #195 on a white background to see which one "pops" more. Thanks.
Pretty much decided on #193, and of course #199. Now a little quick, fine tuning on the bottom two lines of the logo. 1) Take the bottom two lines from entry #194, which includes the bar surrounding "studio" and the words "we do it bigger," and insert into entry #193 and #199. 2) Increase the font size on "we do it bigger" from entry #193 and #199, by one or two sizes. Not sure why, but the font type and size on "studio" and "we do it bigger" from entry #194 appear to be easier to read. Thanks.
1) Please color the words "studio" and "we do it bigger" in entry #208, similar to those corresponding words in entry #204 (with the bar). The word "studio" is hard to read within the bar, on my computer, probably as a result of the "phase effect" on the word. 2) Then give me the "black version" with the above changes, equivalent to entry #203 and we're done. Thanks.
Lol! Good job, I think entry #209 is it. Definitely easier to read! 1) Just want to see what this version (entry #209), looks like (same font style and size as entry #209), with the colors of the word "studio" inverted and placed in a block, as in entry #204. 2) After that one change, place both of these new white background versions (entry #209 and updated entry #204), onto the black background. Note: These will look like updated versions of entry #193 and #203. Hope this is a little clearer. Thanks.
#210 to 212, i am continuous online for next half an hour to so if you can become online then it would be easier to implement directions at once regards..