Entry #10 is too jazz festival. These are a lot funner however. Can you try and embrace fun & more of a yoga feel into the vibe? Fun yet spiritual. Think new dawn. New growth. New life.
There is something very cool about the hand drawn feel you have with these. Especially the mountains and the sun. The font could be bolder, stronger, easier to read from a distance. Yes, less Jazz, with the instruments .. more hip, DJ style, headphones, microphone, thanks! looking forward to seeing more.