#83. Is doing well.
I want to make the text as readable and clean as possible. Perhaps a solid color?
Play with the plants being green around the text - above and below. ( to help frame the text )
Play with the mountains being a touch bigger similar to #46 - you could match the color as well and se if that works.
Play with using the microphone again for the "i" but this style of mic here"
LINK 1 :
http://www.estudiostar.com/media/catalog/product/S/H/SHUSM58-LC.jpg#83 regarding the guitar idea. I asked the other artist to try the guitar. I dont know if that changes things.
We all really like the design. The Key is that the TEXT really stands out.
Good luck and thanks!!!