Arctic Winter BarLogo Design Contest

thank you! after looking at it we want to see one more revision:

Leave #234 above layout as is, but make "broken oar" slightly smaller font size

I’ve removed "A Festive Wintery Drinkery" and moved "Broken Oar" to the bottom with the font size from design #198.
Please review the updated version #235.

maybe use the same size font as "broken oar" on design #198 for the revision

one more revision - please remove 'festive wintery drinkery' and move 'broken oar' in its place at the bottom

Thank you for your feedback! I've made the revisions based on your suggestions and have created a few versions for you to review. Please take a look and let me know your thoughts.

this logo is our main focus

did you see the notes about revising this logo design?

or maybe fill the full circle with the snowflake and have "broken Oar" above on outside of circle and "a festive wintery drinkery" below on outside of circle
as another version

"broken oar" could be smaller to make snowflake larger - and would still work

and a 2nd revision after that - to possibly include "a festive wintery drinkery" maybe underneath outside of circle just to see how that looks

can you change to a different, maybe taller, font and make all one color

please revise to split the snowflake evenly- maybe lay "arctic winter bar" over the top of snowflake instead of cutting and splitting