AORILogo Design Contest

thanks for your feedback,
i sent you the revised design #770 and #776
please check.
if you have any further suggestions please let me know.
best regards
rrkina

how abouth this?

this font type is interesting - though i'm concerned it's not readable so easily as 'aori'... the 'r' could be mistaken as an 'n'.. are there some options to help with this? Also, can we try some black and white versions please. the red isn't working for me.