ok : i have uploaded 6 versions with different angles, fonts and placements for both upper and lower text. also brightened a bit the blue, but i can reverse it if you think the darker one looks better.
i will not comment on them since i don't want to lead you, but i am open to your comments and vision if necessary . Thank you .
please see: #196#197#198#199#200#201
you were right upper text looks better centered. Also I like the lower text in blue....keep all adjustments and variations in blue for the lower text
can we try upper text "anthony's" a little bit longer in length, however in a thinner lettering, less bold font (perhaps starting at the lower text A & ending at the lower text C in "paninoteca" as a suggestion) & I would also like to see it in 2 different angles .......First option: at an incline as shown above (but perhaps a slightly smaller angle/incline since it will be longer....but you are the artist and know more then me as long as it looks balanced)
Second option: once again longer, thinner & less bold font on "Anthony's" (from lower text A to lower text C)
however have the "anthony's" horizontal and parallel with the lower "paninoteca" text. you can feel free to experiment with different font styles on the upper "anthony's" text.... aslo please feel free to experiment with the font style on "anthony's" and or the "Paninoteca" I am open to see various interpretations of this style
thank you
sorry my father passed away so we requested a little extra time.
But yes, a version with blue lines removed....above text moved over to the left....and can we try another separate version were the above text remains in the centered position....has lines removed and resizing the text larger.
thank you
can you remove the lines above and below Anthony's and move Anthony's all the way to the left starting above the letter P. can we also try a separate version with Anthonys in black and Paninoteca in a blue color?
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i will not comment on them since i don't want to lead you, but i am open to your comments and vision if necessary . Thank you .
please see: #196 #197 #198 #199 #200 #201
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(apologize the delay, different time zone)
thanks again.
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can we try upper text "anthony's" a little bit longer in length, however in a thinner lettering, less bold font (perhaps starting at the lower text A & ending at the lower text C in "paninoteca" as a suggestion) & I would also like to see it in 2 different angles .......First option: at an incline as shown above (but perhaps a slightly smaller angle/incline since it will be longer....but you are the artist and know more then me as long as it looks balanced)
Second option: once again longer, thinner & less bold font on "Anthony's" (from lower text A to lower text C)
however have the "anthony's" horizontal and parallel with the lower "paninoteca" text. you can feel free to experiment with different font styles on the upper "anthony's" text.... aslo please feel free to experiment with the font style on "anthony's" and or the "Paninoteca" I am open to see various interpretations of this style
thank you
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my deepest sympathy ...
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But yes, a version with blue lines removed....above text moved over to the left....and can we try another separate version were the above text remains in the centered position....has lines removed and resizing the text larger.
thank you
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regards.
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I'll prepare a version.
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