I like the work on both, but favor Entry #2. Please consider the following adjustments;
1. Reverse coloring so that its a white background the men are black as is the lettering etc. 2. The Moon should be a full moon 3. The men should be closer together and facing each other 4. Eliminate the "male" symbols and replace with "Os" in the lettering
Great work. Entry #3 is terrific. A few requested changes:
1. Delete the decorative wrought iron curleques 2. Reduce the font size on "ANOTHER CHANCE PROM" 3. Change the font to Jazz Let or Revue Shadow or Umbra 4. Increase the size of the entire centerpiece 4. Reduce the size of the moon
Entry #13 looks just about perfect from my perspective. I will let my partners review it and see what they think. If you have any ideas to improve the logo feel free to submit additional entries. I do wonder whether a palm tree on each side of the centerpiece would enhance the logo? Richard
I will be showing your top three entries to my partners. Your work is top notch. I have run out of ideas. However, if you have any more adjustments, feel free to send them on. Thank you for all your hard work. Richard