I've prepared both options and it depends if you want to put a bit more accent on the name #190 or keep it uniform #193. The difference is subtle concerning different colors.
Furthermore, the lagoon blue for the first name may additionally emphasize the rest of the text, but you may consider something darker #191 or in between #192.
The little gray square bothered me as well. Now it's gone.
My last ideas for eventual minor revisions :
- justified alignment for first name and name : I don't know whether it would be better to reduce the size of the first name or to space the letters of the name ?
- The little grey square may look alone : better choose another color (blue) for it ?
- Would it be beautiful to have the first name in light blue ("lagoon" like the square on the top right) ?
Argh I selected this logo as the winner but I just wanted to ask you something : to see if the dash of my first name could be in another color.
I thought I could ask for some last adjustments during the "selection phase"
Hello. This one is really the one I prefer ; if you're the winner will it be possible during the last phase to work on the font (shape and color) and to change the place of the suqare (to put it on the left) ?
This one is a repetitive pattern forming a complete entirety.
Still, I can get back to Piet Mondrian's style with more abstract and unrestricted composition?
Would it be possible to improve this one : I dislike the impression of shrinking horizon but I really like the imbricated squares ; maybe the shape could be on the left of the name (arther than above), and could you please put the colors of #49 that are so light, giving the impression of wide / infinite horizon ?
Thank you for your work. This one is quite smart but appears a bit old-fashioned /"has been" Maybe you could replace the square with something like a (modern !) wooden frame. I don't like this orange that much it would be great to go towards the red.
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Furthermore, the lagoon blue for the first name may additionally emphasize the rest of the text, but you may consider something darker #191 or in between #192.
The little gray square bothered me as well. Now it's gone.
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- justified alignment for first name and name : I don't know whether it would be better to reduce the size of the first name or to space the letters of the name ?
- The little grey square may look alone : better choose another color (blue) for it ?
- Would it be beautiful to have the first name in light blue ("lagoon" like the square on the top right) ?
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I thought I could ask for some last adjustments during the "selection phase"
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Still, I've already prepared some entries with various fonts, so I add them, just in case ;) Still, the one you pointed out is my favorite.
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I've withdrawn it already. Maybe something simpler and without black lines. Different colors.
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Still, I can get back to Piet Mondrian's style with more abstract and unrestricted composition?
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