Hi,
Thank you for your feedback. Sorry for response late, I was off for couple hours ago.
I glad you like my design concept. Along with your feedback and review my current design, I think I found weaknesses of it. Maybe I need to redesign it totally using different font type that can make it looks simple but strong and dynamics. It need much time to do it, so I hope you don't mind to wait my next submission a little bit longer.
Thanks,
Bauhaus