Entry #35 - A few less flourishes in the scrollwork; clean it up a little and make it black. Change Real Estate to Realtor Charleston in black, a little larger font, leave off "sc"
#53 - Please make the Ann larger and more embellished than McAnallen. Charleston should be larger and Bolder. Also try with the key in a bold gold. Can you raise the scrolling above my name and insert vertical lines to resemble an iron gate? Not too tall. As an option, can you insert a pineapple in place of the key? Just for me to see how I like that? Create a beautiful pineapple. The scrolled part above my name looks as though it could be the top of a pretty iron gate. Also, instead of the key, and pineapple, could try inserting a pretty scrolled A?
In addition to the other changes I requested this evening, I have another idea: I see a gate, like you’d see to enter a driveway. One side is closed and it has a pretty script A in it. The other side of the gate is open just a little bit, enough that someone could slip through. On the ground would be a few abstract bricks here and there that fade away quickly. The outside edges of the gate that would connect to the fence fade away quickly so that each side of the gate is actually fairly skinny, but is drawn with perspective lines. The image would not be a big one. Is that clear at all? The focus would be on the closed section with the A.
#85 - Thank you. Please less vertical lines on the gate (more space between them). Make them a little longer in height. Tighten up the scrolling on the top of the gate. Make the right side of the gate less wide (so it doesn't line up with the end of my name on the right). Less "bricks" Put the "A" in a circle on the right side of the gate. Thank you!
#83 - Please add the amount of scroll as in #43 and the same size key as #43. I like the way you have my name and Charleston in #83, but I like the top part better in #43. Thank you.
#93 Do you mind trying another version? Please making a ONE door gate with the iron vertical bars. Have it arched at the top, rounded at the top, and a scrolly A in the center of a circle. On each side of the gate door, have a pillar that comes 3/4 of the way up. Thank you.
I will try. Just wondering, what about some of my last proposals? are they too busy for you? because I see entries that was ranked 1, 2 and 3, they are simple. whether it is the simplicity that you want? just want to be in the right direction
I just re-ranked. I don't want too simple. But I want proportion to be pleasing, without my last name prominent, the word Realtor instead of Real Estate, and Charleston to be prominent without the comma SC. #93 is looking good but the gates are still too wide for me. That's why I'm wondering if a one door gate rather than a two door gate would work better.
Yes, thanks for asking. Picture a stucco wall around a yard. Where the 1 door gate would be located to enter the yard, the stucco wall would have to end where it connects to the gate. I would like to NOT show the wall, but show the Pillars that the gate would connect to on either side. I see the pillars as being a little more than halfway up the height of the gate, may with a flat "shelf" on the pillars where one could place a pot of flowers (or whatever). That would flank the gate. The gate would be taller and not wide, an iron gate with an arch at the top. The A could be either in the top arch or in the middle of the gate door. Is that helpful?
#94 - Please remove the vertical lines from the pillars, so they are less fancy. Please remove the scroll work on the gate and replace with vertical bars not too close together. Can you use a different font for the A in the gate so it's centered? I like the arch of the gate. Thank you!
I think it would be better if the A at the gates and in your name is the same, because it will not reduce the impression of too busy and consistent with the font. does that make sense? I will try to put forward some proposals for your choice. Please wait.
One more, do you want to remove all vertical lines on the pillars?
#113 - I'm sorry, I meant to remove only the interior vertical lines. We need the outside lines so it looks like a pillar. The gate looks very plain. Can you add something to it to make it look more "luxury/expensive"? Please add the lines to the pilars that define it. NO interior lines that give it a Greek column look.
Entry 111 is looking good. Can you make the fence a bit taller by making the vertical lines a little longer?
#116. This may sound strange, but, the pillars...they aren't quite right but I can't figure out what it is but it has to do with the top of the pillars. Is it possible to have the outside edges of the pillar "fade away" somehow. Not completely disappear...
#116 - make the pillars a tad wider. Add a small box within as where a house number would go or historical information. The box should be longer than wider.
#129 Please leave them blank for now. Also, remove the circles at the top of the boxes. #111 and #117, please add the horizontal bar in the back of the A. Also, add one more vertical bar next to the last one on the left so the gate looks more complete.
Please add more vertical bar to include behind the A. And please raise the height of the end posts of the gate like the middle post in #93. I think that will give a better perspective to the opened gate.
#137 - Please give the three "forward" vertical posts a little more weight, similar to what you did on#132. Please lower the height of the center left post just a tiny bit. Please increase the size of the top ornament on the outside posts just a tiny bit, similar to #132.
#138 - Please make the A smaller in the gate, it's too big. Also give the three "forward" vertical posts a tad more weight, similar to what you did on #132.
I like #93, too, but I don't two A's on the gate but I don't know how to fix it.
Also, can you show me a version of #135 with the shorter vertical lines in the gate increased to the same size as those in #93, please? I really like the perspective of #93.
#132 - Please "fade away" the outside edge of each pillar. Let that outside edge be visible, then fade it away maybe 1/3 of the way down. To soften the image and make more of a "hint" on the outside edge.
Please make the horizontal line over my name thinner, like in number #148.
#153 looks good. Please change the bricks. I like the way the bricks in #149 looks, if you can make the bricks in the first two rows a little smaller so you can fit two bricks in the second row, like in #149, I think I'd like that.
I don't know! Let's leave them as they are, in gold, until I see the rest of the color changes. Thank you for asking. If you have a suggestion, please let me know.