Will you please submit #31 with Ann the same size font, McAnAllen in smaller font, and Charleston in larger font. Please change Real Estate to Realtor. Pretty old gas lamp light instead of roof top? Is that possible?
#52, I like the way you minimized McAnallen, and Realtor. Please eliminate the comma and SC after Charleston. Keep Charleston large print. Maybe space letters a bit more in Charleston. I don't like the roof top. Can you think of another graphic that portrays wealth and sophistication?
#56. I like the relationship in size between Ann and McAnallen. Thank you. The n's in Ann are too heavy, too much thickness, and a little too tall. The key looks kind of awkward where it is. Try making it a prettier scrollier key, please show it in a deeper gold color. Play around it with it, please. Do you have an idea for a pineapple in this design? Try making Charleston the same as in your submission #52. Thank you.
#56, here's another idea I'm throwing out to you: off to the side of what you have already with changes I recently requested: I see a gate, like you’d see to enter a driveway. One side is closed and it has a pretty script A in it. The other side of the gate is open just a little bit, enough that someone could slip through. On the ground would be a few abstract bricks here and there that fade away quickly. The outside edges of the gate that would connect to the fence fade away quickly so that each side of the gate is actually fairly skinny, but is drawn with perspective lines. The image would not be a big one. Is that clear at all? The focus would be on the closed section with the A.
#56, also next to "Ann" put in small font Mc and on the next line under the Mc put in same small font Anallen (to break up my last name for easier pronumciation.
Entry 110. The key is too big (too long). Can you make it smaller and dangle it from one of the lower loops, please? It may look better to remove the horizontal lines next to Realtor.
I like the look of #56 better with the key adjustments made as described above for 110. A smaller gold Key to dangle from lower loop on the left side of Ann. Lighten up the n's in A. They have too much visual weight. Thanks!
Entry 56. Use this as the base. Put the gold key on an angle dangling on the left side by a lower loop. Not vertically as you did in 114 and 115. Make the key fancier.
Use #56 Place the key Turn the key on the other side of Ann on one of the lower loops. Have the bottom of the key turned towards the outside. Make the key fancier.