America's Best Gourmet Bagel CafeLogo Design Contest

Green,

Thank you for your entry.

Can you swap the lettering in your graphic?

It would be interesting to see the graphic/banner with words "America's Best" at the top of the image and the words "Gourmet Bagel Cafe" placed where the stars are. The stars can be relocated somewhere else to compensate....you may need to add a star or two.

If you can make the bagels look like bagels that would be interesting. I don't want their to be any mistake that the image is depicting Bagels and not donuts.

Also, can you do a Red, White and Blue version. I think I would be interesting to see a version with that theme.

Can't wait to see your re-submit.

Good luck.....

Marvin Thomas

Green,

Thank you for the resubmit.

Entry #46 is very well put together.

It has a more easier reading flow....from top to bottom.

Can you make the lettering in the words "Gourmet Bagel Cafe" and the white border in the image the same color/shade of white in the words "America's Best" ?

Regarding the bagels....is it possible to create a bit more "POP" to the images of the bagels. I don't want their to be any mistake that the sign is displaying images of bagels

A red, white and Blue version would be interesting to see.....if its possible for you to do it.

Can't wait to see a re-submit.

Good luck

thanks thomas for u comment
and this comment reference entry #48, #49 and #50, #51

i hope u like it

regards
green

Updated #66, #72