No problem, I want you to be happy with the design. :)
I've made two variations, the difference is in the hairstyles and the position of the child closest to the front seat.
Thanks Nevenitta,
Sorry to be a pin but we have now decided on the final revision. Please make changes as follows:
- Move the web address back to the position in was in #73;
- Please make the characters all shadowed like #74;
- Please make the characters shapes all like #74 except for the child closest to the front seat ... it kind of looks like he is wearing a cowboy hat presently.
With those done we should be there and can finalise the award.
Thanks again for your help.
Regards,
Grizza
Hi Nevenitta and Merry Christmas to You!
Thanks for the update ... looks good. Thanks also for checking in and getting the green light from peg re the figures.
Can we try a revision with the following changes please:
- relocate web address to 'arch' under the Great Australia Bight area;
- change the the two boys hair to blonde and make 'wavey';
- change the girls hair to browny blonde long hair and make shirt orange;
- change boy in back to red shirt;
- change position of hands of the two kids in very back so they are 'high fiving' like design 74;
- change mother hair to blonde and make long;
- change mothers shirt to a yellow (same shade as sun rays); and
- change father to have a shaved head.
Thanks again and look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Grizza
Ok, I'll get to work! Can you please tell me if adding the family in the car was your suggestion to the designer Peg770, or did she upload the designs with the family in the car without your instructions to do that? Logo Tournament has certain rules about reserved concepts so I need to ask you about this.
Apologies for the delay in correspondence over the last couple of days. We have had a couple of busy days getting last minute organisation and packing sorted but now officially on the road!! A big drive ahead today but will be in regular contact throughout the remaining finalist phase.
Cheers,
Grizza
Hi Nevenitta,
We are very happy with this revision. Congratulations, thanks again and we look forward to working with you over the next 7-ish days to finalise the design.
Kind Regards,
Grizza
Hello again!
We are imagining the design on both a web page and on the side of our vehicles. This image shape we can easily imagine but would be interested to see how a rectangular shape would compare.
Could you please try rearranging all of the great components of the above image to fit a rectangular format for comparison.
Regards,
Grizza
Thanks for the variations of the design. We really like the change of colour to yellow from orange & font change...and also the addition of the stars!
Could we please try a reversal of colours for comparison:
- blue sky to yellow (to give the feel of a sun... maybe some rays?)
- yellow Australia to blue.
In addition to above:
- an upside down tinny (small boat) on trailer and move the lotus image to the side panel of the car.
Thanks for your patience!
Regards,
Grizza
Thank you for feedback and compliments! I've made the adjustments, two shades of yellow Australia, and a playful childish font to emphasize word "Weather". Your comments are very welcome.
Hi Nevenitta,
Great revision. The lotus also reminds us of the Sydney Opera House roof...! However it seems to somewhat take away the softness of your previous designs. We do love that you are thinking out of the box though and welcome fresh ideas!
Please see above comments just posted re some changes on the previous rev.
Thanks again and look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Grizza
Hi Nevenitta,
This is our favourite of your designs so far. We like the softness of the circle at the back.
A couple of further tweaks:
- Please change the text to a softer, more child-like fun font with an emphasis on the word "Weather".
- Try Australia as a shade of yellow.
Thanks again and look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Grizza
Hi, thanks for feedback.
I've made the changes: Text adjustment, Australia color, white lotus and Buddha image. I used different details (clouds, birds, light rays, little stars) that can be combined in a way you like. Looking forward to your comment!
Hi Nevenitta,
Thanks for the revised design and considering our comments. A few further comments as follows:
- We like the concept of the camper and 4wd travelling over Australian terrain;
- We would like to change the colour of Australia; not sure what to however ... perhaps orange or yellow. Please consider;
- We understand what you are portraying with the clouds in the trailer however the concept we want to convey is one of taking your 'inner calm weather' with you no matter what challenges you face along the way. The physical 'weather' portrayed in the current design currently is more of a literal take on the weather itself ... we don't want to take the stormy weather with us on this trip (haha)!
- We like the birds;
- We can see you are on the right track introducing the lotus ... thanks. However, we would like to see a different colour (eg white with a sprinkle of magic or perhaps a 'buddah image on the back of the trailer').
Thanks again and look forward to hearing back from you.
Regards,
Grizza
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Thank you so much for your patience throughout the process. Wishing you all the best with all further logo tournaments.
Cheers,
Grizza
No problem, I want you to be happy with the design. :)
I've made two variations, the difference is in the hairstyles and the position of the child closest to the front seat.
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Sorry to be a pin but we have now decided on the final revision. Please make changes as follows:
- Move the web address back to the position in was in #73;
- Please make the characters all shadowed like #74;
- Please make the characters shapes all like #74 except for the child closest to the front seat ... it kind of looks like he is wearing a cowboy hat presently.
With those done we should be there and can finalise the award.
Thanks again for your help.
Regards,
Grizza
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Thanks for the update ... looks good. Thanks also for checking in and getting the green light from peg re the figures.
Can we try a revision with the following changes please:
- relocate web address to 'arch' under the Great Australia Bight area;
- change the the two boys hair to blonde and make 'wavey';
- change the girls hair to browny blonde long hair and make shirt orange;
- change boy in back to red shirt;
- change position of hands of the two kids in very back so they are 'high fiving' like design 74;
- change mother hair to blonde and make long;
- change mothers shirt to a yellow (same shade as sun rays); and
- change father to have a shaved head.
Thanks again and look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Grizza
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Ok, I'll get to work! Can you please tell me if adding the family in the car was your suggestion to the designer Peg770, or did she upload the designs with the family in the car without your instructions to do that? Logo Tournament has certain rules about reserved concepts so I need to ask you about this.
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Also, we would like to include our website details somewhere.
www.taketheweatherwithyou.com
Look forward to seeing what you come up with.
Cheers,
Grizza
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Apologies for the delay in correspondence over the last couple of days. We have had a couple of busy days getting last minute organisation and packing sorted but now officially on the road!! A big drive ahead today but will be in regular contact throughout the remaining finalist phase.
Cheers,
Grizza
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We are very happy with this revision. Congratulations, thanks again and we look forward to working with you over the next 7-ish days to finalise the design.
Kind Regards,
Grizza
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We are imagining the design on both a web page and on the side of our vehicles. This image shape we can easily imagine but would be interested to see how a rectangular shape would compare.
Could you please try rearranging all of the great components of the above image to fit a rectangular format for comparison.
Regards,
Grizza
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Thanks for the variations of the design. We really like the change of colour to yellow from orange & font change...and also the addition of the stars!
Could we please try a reversal of colours for comparison:
- blue sky to yellow (to give the feel of a sun... maybe some rays?)
- yellow Australia to blue.
In addition to above:
- an upside down tinny (small boat) on trailer and move the lotus image to the side panel of the car.
Thanks for your patience!
Regards,
Grizza
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Great revision. The lotus also reminds us of the Sydney Opera House roof...! However it seems to somewhat take away the softness of your previous designs. We do love that you are thinking out of the box though and welcome fresh ideas!
Please see above comments just posted re some changes on the previous rev.
Thanks again and look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Grizza
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This is our favourite of your designs so far. We like the softness of the circle at the back.
A couple of further tweaks:
- Please change the text to a softer, more child-like fun font with an emphasis on the word "Weather".
- Try Australia as a shade of yellow.
Thanks again and look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Grizza
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I've made the changes: Text adjustment, Australia color, white lotus and Buddha image. I used different details (clouds, birds, light rays, little stars) that can be combined in a way you like. Looking forward to your comment!
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Thanks for the revised design and considering our comments. A few further comments as follows:
- We like the concept of the camper and 4wd travelling over Australian terrain;
- We would like to change the colour of Australia; not sure what to however ... perhaps orange or yellow. Please consider;
- We understand what you are portraying with the clouds in the trailer however the concept we want to convey is one of taking your 'inner calm weather' with you no matter what challenges you face along the way. The physical 'weather' portrayed in the current design currently is more of a literal take on the weather itself ... we don't want to take the stormy weather with us on this trip (haha)!
- We like the birds;
- We can see you are on the right track introducing the lotus ... thanks. However, we would like to see a different colour (eg white with a sprinkle of magic or perhaps a 'buddah image on the back of the trailer').
Thanks again and look forward to hearing back from you.
Regards,
Grizza
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