I really like the legibility of the company name on this one. Consider dropping the tag line all together, as its hard to read and wordy. Perhaps also change the oval shape. It just looks very "Land Rover" to me currently.
This is really nice. Grass feels a bit "thin." Not necessarily the blades of grass, though it could be that. I think its the volume and denseness. Perhaps change the black circle back into an oval and add more blades of grass? -Either way, great work!
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