All Roof Solutions-Commercial DivisionLogo Design Contest

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Make the red curve just a little thicker and put a little more white space between red curve and bottom black area.
Try just 3 buildings at the top. Make them all 3 different designs.
Make screw heads tiny bit bigger and make sure they are centered on the words and in line with the radius of circle.
Try one options where you use a gray background for ALL ROOF SOLUTIONS area.
If we select you as winner, can we still make some small adjustments before getting final logo sent to us?

Hi, i am sory, i cannot use metal plate, since it was done by another designer before me. i will respect the rules in this logotournament. check the updates.

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Yes, reduce window size. They are too big. Move screws closer to words. Add spires / antennaes to tops of a couple buildings.
Solutions is too close to red line. All Roof Solutions needs to pop out more. Maybe create metal plate for ALL ROOF SOLUTIONS. Try gray background and red letters.

here for more simple building, but still on similiar skyline theme. i think we should reduce the windows.

Red screws don't work. Go back to black and just a little smaller.
Red V just a little bigger. Skyline too busy, too many buildings. Pull buildings away from edge of black circle to give more space.

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Interesting! Too big though. Pull All Roof Solutions back inside the circle of the logo.

Better. Flatten out red V a little. Too much white space above All Roof.
Delete red circle behind buildings.
Change screw heads to red. Make them just a little bigger.

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Red line is too fat. Add red outline to commercial skyline. Add a few windows in buildings. Maybe turn All Roof Solutions area of logo into steel plate. Make the All Roof Solutions part POP / stand out.

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I really like a lot of parts of this design. Screw heads look good except maybe move them outside of circle, have 4 of them, one at the beginning and one at the end of the words Commercial and Division. Change the buildings. Maybe use actual outline of Atlanta GA skyline.

I like the screw heads. Buildings are too eastern in appearance. Use more western city skyline. Maybe use actual outline of Atlanta GA skyline. Make the red curve thicker. Possibly add some rivets. maybe make it look like a steel man hole cover.

Move Commercial above logo following line of circle
Move Division below logo following line of circle.
Don't like the skyline needs work. Too uniform. Add some curved roofs or spires.
Add some commercial elements like say rivets or screw heads