Alafaya Pediatric DentistryLogo Design Contest

#32 Is this closer? I'll be here the remainder of the day if you have any feedback, thanks!

Hi.
I'm working on a new design now and will send over soon. I had a half day of dental hygiene. : )

Fair enough. I'll work on the head and submit a new design soon. Thanks for your feedback!

I like that turtle body - but not the head. Just doesn’t quite look right

#25 Here's a new version. I am calling it a night but will check in tomorrow for feedback. Thanks!

Very cool!! Looking forward to seeing what you create

Haha! Okay. I’ll scrap this guy and work in another.
By the way, I’m also a dental hygienist!

Something about this turtle just looks off. I just showed my kids and they thought it was a person with a weird hat. Can you change the turtle - maybe to one who is more comical in nature (see the attachment I have of the other dental logo with the frog)

#22 Revisions. Let me know your thoughts, thanks!

#21 Revisions. Let me know if you would like to see any changes.

Got it! Working on that now.

Yes I would like entire turtle symmetrical. I like your toothbrush though, so would still like that in the design somehow.

I can make the turtle shell, etc. completely symmetrical if that is what you prefer.

#19 Head is completely straight, let me know if you would like to see any other changes.

I am working on a new design to make the turtles head completely straight. I just saw you new message.

Still looks asymmetrical - can you make the head looking completely straight ?

#17 On this one, the turtle's head is not tilted.

Sure. I just have his head slightly tilted and his smile tilted as well, which pushes up his cheek a little more . I’ll make his face more symmetrical overall.

Can you make the eyes the same size? The face looks asymmetrical

#15 I've further refined the design. Let me know if you would like to see any changes, font, etc. thanks!

Thanks for your comments. I’ll make changes now and send a new one over shortly.

The arms of the turtle are different sizes which looks weird to me. Face looks better - but needs some face around the eyes (it looks like the eyes go to the end of the face). Could he hold a toothbrush?

#12 Just wanted t show you how the design looks on a color background, maybe your website, makes it look as if the turtle is actually under the sea. : )

#11 I've put a bit more space between the turtle and 'ALAFAYA'. Used the same green at 75% for the highlighted areas, in stead of white.

#10 I'm still working on the facial expression of the turtle, made the eyes slightly larger in this one. I'll continue to work on improving my design, thanks again for your feedback.

Thanks for your input! We do not want scary! I'll continue to work on improving the turtle.

Layout is nice and simple. I like how the turtle is facing forward, but I do not like the appearance of the turtle - he looks scary. Maybe make the eyes larger and add teeth? Give it a more friendly appearance. I like the beanie baby boo animals (which are the plush animals with big eyes).

#1 Hi. Here is my design for your logo project. I have used only 3 colors, no gradients, so that you will have ease of reproducing, embroidering, etc. Thanks in advance for your consideration and feedback is appreciated!