I like this idea. Is there another color you can use for the airplane/tagline besides that blue...maybe a darker blue or some other color altogether? Also, the ".com" seems to get lost. Can you make that more prominent either by the color, size, placement?
I sent some updates with different color options trying to follow your instructions... but please don't mind to ask about any other change or suggestion
thanks to rank my designs so high please don't mind to ask about any change that you wanted to see
but remember that to be allowed to send any variation I need to be ranked first.... during the "judging period" just the designer ranked first is allowed to send variations....
just fyi, during that period you can switch the designer ranked first anytime to ask for variations, and select the winner anytime