I like the graphic element you included on #58 and #59. How would you incorporate the slogan: Your Fashion Moment.
Would your design be affected if you read this as..."your aha moment"?
When it's all caps, I don't think it reads like the expression, but more like initials, so would you see how this feedback might change your design. I like your approach with the graphic. It's a jewelry boutique, with fashion a possibility down the road.