Uh oh, my team doesn't like the plus sign. Please put the asterisk back in. then do a few combinations of colors in the African color palate---reds, gold, yellows, greens---whatever you think looks good, including one that is just black/white/grey. We're close.
Quick work, Creative, thanks. You are still top of the list coming into the final day of this phase. The question is whether this design #65, or the earlier #42 is better. Can you go back to the horizon of #42 with a smaller--half size--star but keep this T-shirt? You're doing great! Thanks for your patience!
Can you do another version with four changes, please? 1) without the star on the image and in the "O". 2) smooth the left-side horizon and curve the right-side to match the left. This is intended to subtly shape the horizon into an open book. 3) Thicken the tanktop slightly to fill in closer to the neck and over the shoulder. This is to make it more a T-shirt instead of a tanktop. 4) Add Madagascar
Much better. I lean more to this simple design than the entry with the trees on the horizon. However, I may want the star in the "O." In situations when we use only our name and no graphic, the star would evoke the full graphic.
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