Hi, I like your work. I don't know how to make suggestions to improve it, but if you could somehow make it more dynamic, add more movement to it - it seems a little static maybe?
I really like your work on #144 - but could you slightly reduce the coil part (just make the revolutions a little less tight) and extend the design outward a bit to make it less contained? It still feels a little static, even though it is unique and interesting
I really like your work on #167 I am not a fan of a blue/pink color combination which it seems a little close to - are you able to replace the pink color with a light purple instead?
Thanks Lloyd, I think I had envisioned more a lilac with the dark purple. However, the blues really make the logo appear more masculine - and i am aiming for predominantly a female market. Could you try a colour scheme with a dark pink/light pink color combination? Still based on #167