Advising QueueLogo Design Contest

Hello,
Please feedback for my design update

Thanks for feedback. Please feedback for my revision update. I would like to revise as your request until you are satisfied.

Regards,
Girikedaton

we like the thinner design better, good call on that change, can you also drop the text, we decided we did not like our tag line

Hello,

Thanks for choosing me as finalish. Please feedback for revision update. if any other revision you need, please let me know. I will revise as your request as soon as possible.

Best Regards,
Girikedaton