Like the simplicity of the words, but the logo is a bit too complex to look good on an embroidered shirt. Lime green would not be a preferred choice on the white background.
Entry number 8 and 10 have colors that are not appealing. I think the simplicity of Entry #3, perhaps with a globe to show the worldwide nature of our safaris would be more along the lines of what we are trying to promote.
Hi, Mungi....thanks for the additional entries. Entries like number 20 and 21 are too detailed, and will not convert well to the local safaris. I like your designs for Alternative Equity and Smartium, and something along those lines would show the elegance of the international safaris, and more easily convert to local safaris like Chicago Adventure Safaris and San Fran Adventure Safaris.
#23 and #24 have too much weight on the top. Like the font, and if we can add a simple, linear swoosh design of some sort, or maybe a globe with a border around everything?
If the two tones were complimentary to our current logo, entry #23 would be better. Like the words, but need to come up with a simple symbol to replace the heavier look that is on #23. We also need to keep in mind that these will be localized to cities like Chicago and San Francisco, and those names will need to appear on those localized designs.
Hi, Mungki....Two questions....are you planning another submittal that might respond to the note above? Also, if chosen, do you have any problems providing the logo with the city identifiers of Chicago and San Fran along with different file formats needed for each of the 3 variations?
and I'm sorry if my english is not good ... because all this time I had to communicate with you using the google translator ... and wish you well pleased...
The symbol in #23 is too big. Also, if you can please use the colors in one of our current logos (Photo Safari Network.com) it would be appreciated. Thanks!
Hi, Mungki...you are a great designer to work with...this one just didn't work out, but would love to work with you again if we have another contest. Thanks again!