I think it's cute but there's too much detail. I love this giraffe. I would remove the stethoscope and headlight and maybe add a toothbrush. Take away the slogan at the bottom and I would choose lettering that is more simple since the giraffe stands out.
Thank you so much for participating. I like this one. I would change the color scheme a bit. I'm sold on the blue for Adventure and pink for the pediatric dentistry. can you change the giraffe to make it more dental vs medical?
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here some revision base on your last feedback.
what do you thing?
rgd, mbahdjoyo
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any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.
best rgd, mbahdjoyo