Adult Play Date Charity EventLogo Design Contest

here my entry for consideration, comment are welcome

kindly regard
ketut

Hello Ketut,

Thank-you for your submission, We listed our comments below:

We feel it does not communicate the playful,big kid,summer fun element we're looking for.
We would like to include the hosting company's name in the logo "The City Vault"
The color combinations don't communicate summer fun!

We listed below sample logo's, to help you get a better understanding of what we are looking for :

We like the color combination

http://www.behance.net/gallery/The-Yawd-Sale-Online-Vintage-Store/8304135
http://www.behance.net/gallery/Fun-Night/569821
http://www.behance.net/gallery/Waldo-Trommler-Paints/4271847


We like how the font and the image ties together for example the April Fools Run Logo (listed below) has a nice clean font inside of a jokers hat. Showing the connection between April fools and the impractical joker.

http://www.bewallpaper.com/grease-the-musical-the-official-tour-website-fun-stuff/
http://www.thelogomix.com/files/u7/april-fools-fun.jpg
http://www.behance.net/gallery/T-Shirts-Run-For-Fun/7172097
http://www.recessguardians.com/
http://www.behance.net/gallery/Hungry-Hungry-Hackers/6248165


We truly appreciate your submission and look forward to your next logo creation(s).

Can you please incorporate The City Vault Presents in the logos

excuse me, what is The City Vault ? :)

The hosting company for the event. Its an event planning and promotions company.

ok working on it :)

update at entry #24 #29, comment are welcome

I love the direction we're moving in! Can we play around with different textures behind the font? Can we try having the city vault presents in one color?

ok working on it