I really like the designs here. What I like about #9 is that it captures the clients visually whereas #10 looks more like it has to do with clients. But I really like the image you've created in the "Local" part on #13. I wonder if there is a way to catch all the elements visually of "adding clients" and the network web growing outward like their business is expanding as depicted in #13. I really like the blue and orange colors as well.Entry number 5 is my least favorite of the three.
Is there a way to make those people look more like people cuz I really dig this design as well. It just looks a little like a telecom company or something right off the bat. Once you study it, it makes sense. I really like your fonts and colors. You are a good, creative designer.