another bit of feedback: with the font treatment and kerning, she's wanting to make her own "mark" verses just lines of text if that makes sense. Don't be afraid to get a little artistic with the word placement or lettering, etc.
She's liking the font and "something" on the left side. She's not gravitating toward the curvy line or the plant stem. Please see the font style and kerning of the logo I just uploaded and let me know if there's something similar we could play with here. I know this is broad feedback - let me know if you have questions.
Thank you. The client is requesting "font and color variations" - perhaps some typography kerning and ideas around the color treatment. What do you think?
It looks like we want to move in this direction - she's happy with the simple design. Do you have ideas for improving or kerning the typography or other treatments? thank you!
could we see this with
-equal sized lettering for all three words
- all in one color (no red / yellow)
- left justified on three levels
make sense? let me know if you have questions! thank you. B
could we please see this with all the fonts closer to the same size? it might be interesting to put two dots on the sides of the "o" to form two people? does that make sense?
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-equal sized lettering for all three words
- all in one color (no red / yellow)
- left justified on three levels
make sense? let me know if you have questions! thank you. B
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