Dear Sir/Madam,
many thanks for you recent entries in our logo competition. We were particularly impressed by entries #16 & #17, and we'd love to see more material, or different arrangements of this design (maybe different layouts/colour schemes?). We're quite happy to leave the picture alone, but it may also be helpful to see similar designs with a more traditional font too?
I look forward to seeing more of your work, and with any luck, selecting one of your logos as our winner!
Hope this helps; many thanks for the great work so far!
Regards
Angela Maher
Managing Director
Acumen Financial Partnership
amaher@acumenonline.net