#10 partially has some of the things I am looking for, but it is not near good enough to replace our existing logo. I hope you or someone out there can look at our existing logo and make it better and updated with a mind blowing update that forces us to replace our 15 year existing logo.
on #12 try a version with the AS and V letters lined up directly over one another (with each ove going down in size like you have it). Also add thin black outline to letters ASV and COM .
Just checked out some of your other work. Really Like what you did with MVP Graphics, Cogent RED, FLB, Disko Dasko and Brandon Wagner Racing.
Would love to see some other (different) concepts you may have for our logo, in addition to the remake off the older logo versions you are doing as well?
#22 is kind of cool, but it needs to have each line of text get bigger as they go. Would be nice to see a version of this one with a little slant effect on it as well. THANKS
When you get a chance, I would love to see versions of #25 1) with .com in black 2) with .com in white 3) with .com made a little smaller than the rest of the letters?
Can we please try a version of #29 with a) the "V" in video moved over to the right so it is centered (vertically) with (between) the "A" and the "S" ? It is ok to make the .com a little smaller (width wise) to compensate.
Can we please try a version of #29 with a) the "V" in video moved over to the right so it is centered (vertically) with (between) the "A" and the "S" ? It is ok to make the .com a little smaller (width wise) to compensate. b) take out the star.
Can we please try a version of #29 with a) the "V" in video moved over to the right so it is centered (vertically) with (between) the "A" and the "S" ? It is ok to make the .com a little smaller (width wise) to compensate. b) take out the star. c) make the "S"in sports a little more like a regular S with the mid section less fat.
Please keep the rest of it the same (especially the edges) I like all the edges of it a lot (except the 1st "S").
Sorry to say I pretty much lost you on that last round. This is the front running logo and I really want to dial it in more. So I will try again and hopefully explain myself better this time :)
Now the front running logo is #26 because I like the outside outline shape better than #29 (see lower right sides).
Please make a version of #26 but please 1) make the word ".com" like it is in #29 (disconnected from the word above more) BUT PLEASE make the outside shape outline and width like it is in version #26 (sticking out farther on the right than the word "sports"above it on the right side).
2) Please make a version of this with the star taken out, but you need to make the inside of this "O" like the other "O" with the black and white outlines in the middle of it. I still like the star but it may be a bit much and I want to see the dialed in logo version without it, just want the "O" to look right.
>>Thirdly and most importantly<< - I have asked this certain thing a few times and you don't seem to be understanding what I am trying to say. 3) Please shrink the width of the word "Video" from the left side to the right so that the letters "ASV" line up together from the center out. Picture a string pinned to the top center of the letter "A" and the other side of the string is pinned to the bottom center of the letter "V" and the string is tight. PLEASE make it so the letters "ASV" line up perfectly centered underneath the string. Look at our current existing logo and how the ASV do this. This is one of the aspects of our current logo we are hoping to preserve, while incorporating it into your cool new design. Just shrinking the width of the word "Video" from the left side to the right should accomplish this.
Hello Erik, I will work on your request now. I think I understand no.3 now. Thank you so much for explaining it, really appreciate it. Will upload the designs right away once they are done.
#49 is the one closest so far but it needs tweaking still.
Please 1) Push "Video" in from the left a little more further. (not a lot) I just want to get that >ramp< feel. Please 2) Push ".com" out to the right more so the whole logo steps (terraces) on the right side like #26 does perfectly. Please 3) Bring back the cool flared out sharp edges you had on the right side corners of the "m" of the ".com" (see # 29) they were lost on the new #49
Have been taking in all the logos in the last hours and I am really liking #49. Now I like the way you rounded the edges a little on the edge of the "m" of the .com on this version.
The only thing we need to do is shift the last line "Video.com" from left to the right a little and we may be on to something!
Hello Lloyd , Life is good, thanks for asking. No, I am not changing directions regarding the design of the logo at all? I have a few different directions that I may be exploring and have multiple ideas going at the same time. I love your logos and what you have done. I am glad we are on to the next phase together. I am going to rest a little, but I will be back soon to see about doing some fine tuning with you on the logo we are dialing in together ( it is pretty much there, just thought we might try some different colors and make it pop a little more.).
Thank you for the information Erik. Yes, feel free to let me know any modifications you would like to see. As of the moment, I will rest here as well, as you can see I'm from Philippines and it's 4:28 am now in our place. Will check in first thing in the morning when I wake up. Hoping to hear some feedback from you soon.
Here we are, your #56 (or versions of it) has been the most consistent logo in the contest so far. It is one of my favorites for sure and I have been getting good feedback on it from co-workers and friends. It is also the most logical choice to replace our old logo in many ways. So you have a lot of good things going in your favor.
As a good businessman I need to push myself and the other designers as far as possible to come up with something amazing if possible? So in addition to the list of modifications I would like to try on #56, please feel free to submit some other designs of other concepts (different than #56). You see what I am going after for the most part look and design wise. Show me something else close to what I am liking that blows everything else out of the water to solidify your strong logo contender further with a strong back up or two. I want to give you my personal guarantee that if you submit some more different alternate logo ideas, it will not effect the standing or my opinion of your #56 in any way. As I said in detail above, this #56 logo has a lot going for it, but it would be a great idea to put in some other ideas to counter any strong other designs that might be coming in at the last day or 2 here.
O.K. as for the modifications (more just a list of slight variations of what we have now).
The 3 modifications I do need are - 1) Please move/shift the words "Sports" and "Video" into the right a slight bit more. They (the S and the V) are still off axis alignment slightly with the A as far as my eye is telling me...PLEASE DO NOT CHANGE THE RIGHT SIDE EDGE OF THESE WORDS, just move the left side in please. 2) Please make the hole in the "A" of "Action" a little bit bigger (not much, but it is hard to see now). 3) Please move the Triangle Play Icon in the middle of the "O" one click or two to the right.
Please let's also make a half dozen or more different versions of #56
My one main fault with logo #56 is that it may not be popping out enough. This may have a lot to do with the edges and outlines that seem to vary randomly with a lot of your submissions.
Let's try versions with - a) the 1st "S" in "Sports" still seems to fat in the middle of the body. Is it possible to try a version with this area trimmed down (just a little)??? b) do a version with lit up by lens flare. (I don't like hard edged lens flare effects that leave a big line across the middle of the logo like in #44, but I DO LIKE the effect that lights up the whole logo evenly like the upper portion of #44 (but if the whole logo was light up evenly across with no line). c) do version with more white in the outline like the "V in #52 on all letters. d) try some different outlines. e) try some different colors like brighter red and orange and blues. f) try anything like additional styles or techniques that you feel might strengthen this logo??
Thanks so much Lloyd, you are a pleasure to work with.
Hello Erik, thank you so much for the great feedback and directions. Unfortunately I'm not home yet, had to run some errands but will be back sooner and will work on all the updates right away.
I really don't like that new font very much sorry to report.
I would like to do versions of #56 with all the styles you did on #148-156 to look at color/outline/effect styles.
On the "S" on Sports font issue on #56. Can't you change that one letter to vector and edit it down a little with the Pen Tool?
#166 looks cool (but I would like the .com taller like #56 better on it), but you are off again on the ASV Pendulum alignment (see link below about Pendulum alignment). #56 is still not right as well. The S and the V are to far to the left of the A still. Please see my diagram of this (and look at the new #165) and let's fix this on #56 before we go further on #56 color/outline/effect styles to look at.
I had to tell Pakde 30 or more times about this issue with the ASV and he finally got it right on #165 after seeing my diagram.