#1 This is too understated - hard to understand the graphic. Took a while to realize it is a globe. Need some more energy in the logo design then this shows. Reviewd your portofolio - lIke the elegance and simplicity of your designs eg ecclesia church, tripod, well balanced life on page 1
FYR: There are multiple individuals giving feedback to the Academy for Systemic Practice contest - all are using the same Username "Keli Yen".
This is feedback from however the Account holder, the real Keli Yen: Entry #1: - I enjoy the elegance and simplicity of the typography. - Because the image is small & difficult to see the details, it is difficult for me to fully appreciate its significance. - I'd prefer more vibrance to the colors.
#19 - We are looking for an image that is more dynamic - think fluid and motion with simple clean typography - we are now leaning more toward a graphic/ image or rather than a picture