Hello, Thank you again for your continue feedback..
please check #118, #119 and #120
hope this what you mean, if not yet.. I'll pleasure for other rev.
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Amanterkendali
My comments: this is the front runner with a few minor edits:
1. Use the blue color on the hand also in the word "Care". Use the purple color in your entry 109 for the butterfly (keep the shading variation) and the word "Abuse."
2. Change the "a" to "A" with a flourish so it looks like a slide (if you can)
3. eliminate the green semi-circle.
4. Use the tag line to create a semi-circle around the hand and butterfly starting at the "A" in Abuse and ending at the "e" in "Care." Put the tagline in all caps large enough to be readable.
Hi, Thank you so much for your feedback..
your contest now at selection phase.
only first rank designer that able to send revisions.
if you still want to my rev, you can temporary rotate the rank..
so when I'm in first rank I able to submit new entries.
Thank you
Best regards
Amanterkendali
We like this design and it's one of our favorites. However, we have a few requests for modifications:
1. Please remove stars and circle
2. Lighter shade of colors for hand and butterfly, please use subtle gradients
3. Good font, but please make softer and less heavy/bold
4. Thumb/palm looks a little too arched, please smooth out top left more
Please submit a new version by Friday so we can select the winner. If you have any questions, please let us know. Thank you!
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please check #118, #119 and #120
hope this what you mean, if not yet.. I'll pleasure for other rev.
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
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1. Use the blue color on the hand also in the word "Care". Use the purple color in your entry 109 for the butterfly (keep the shading variation) and the word "Abuse."
2. Change the "a" to "A" with a flourish so it looks like a slide (if you can)
3. eliminate the green semi-circle.
4. Use the tag line to create a semi-circle around the hand and butterfly starting at the "A" in Abuse and ending at the "e" in "Care." Put the tagline in all caps large enough to be readable.
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your contest now at selection phase.
only first rank designer that able to send revisions.
if you still want to my rev, you can temporary rotate the rank..
so when I'm in first rank I able to submit new entries.
Thank you
Best regards
Amanterkendali
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We like this design and it's one of our favorites. However, we have a few requests for modifications:
1. Please remove stars and circle
2. Lighter shade of colors for hand and butterfly, please use subtle gradients
3. Good font, but please make softer and less heavy/bold
4. Thumb/palm looks a little too arched, please smooth out top left more
Please submit a new version by Friday so we can select the winner. If you have any questions, please let us know. Thank you!
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any feedback?