Abraham JamLogo Design Contest

Yes, the size is similar with 212

additional: the size of the "peace sign" circle and "note symbol" circle are a little smaller in your design #217 -- can they also be that same smaller size in #215?

sorry -- i meant is the font size of "HARMONY > UNITY" in design #215 the same as it is for those words in #212 ? we love all the font sizes and details of #212 , but wanted to start with it all on a purple circle with white print.

question: is the font size of "HARMONY > UNITY" in designe #217 the same as it is for those words in #212? we love all the font sizes and details of #212, but wanted to start with it all on a purple circle with white print.

ps -- by the way, we appreciate all the options you've sent!!!!

hi - we're finalizing. can the '>' (greater-than symbol) be larger like you have it in design #217?

Thanks much. Got it! One last check in with the guys, and we will commit!

Best,

David

Here is the update #222
Thanks!

Sure, no problem at all...

Maybe make the lines of the peace sign thicker too,/ so that it balanced the note better. Thanks again!

Hey there- almost done! Can you try inverting the peace sign so that we can see the outer circle rather than just implying it? Thanks!

hello from Abraham Jam -- WE LOVE THE DESIGN you've created and we are almost done! we like the version ranked 1st best, and have some requests. I am sending them to you directly through the message system, instead of posting them here, because LogoTournaments website thinks that my requests to you are about other peoples designs and won't let me post the requests -- but the requests are all about elements from different versions of your design. Please let us know that you got the message with the requests.

We look forward to seeing the adjustments to the design.

THANK YOU!!!

After seeing the latest entry that i've submitted, i think i have to edit the position of the three icons on the middle. I try to make it centered, and i think its better.

Please tell me what do you think.

Thanks!

I have uploaded the clean version. Please check this : #210

Thanks!

Hi :)
Sorry for late response.
I will make it now.
Thanks!

Hi there — I don't know if you saw my most recent note, but I would love to see a 'clean' version of this— with no distressing. We are pretty much out of time. Can you send us that? I think it's the way we need to go.

Hello,
I have made 11 entries with 11 different font or typeface.
I have made some entries with different distressed stamp design style. So after you review these new update, please provide any advise, in case like you want to exchange some entries based on font or background each other. For example you want to exchange the background of #204 to be like the entry #209.

Well, thats all for now.

Hello.
So sorry for late response.
Now i understand, its about rubber stamp style. Sure, it is really different with woodcut feel.

I will make it now and upload soon..

Regards,

Rb

Hi there,

We just had a team meeting, and we're getting really close. We like this one, and want to try just a couple more adjustments:

1 - Could we try a couple of other fonts? In this one, it's hard to distinguish between the A, the B and the R. The other font option you sent is a little better, but we didn't love the vibe of the font, and the letters aren't as tall. Can you try a couple of others? I know this is abstract, but we want something that is classy, whimsical, and warm and inviting. Not sure what font says all of that. :-)

2 - I'm sorry, I have done a pretty poor job of communicating about what I was calling a wood cut. The better language for that would have been a rubber stamp. Do you know what I mean by the imperfect, slightly distressed print pattern of a rubber stamp? Could you try something like that? I think we will either want to go with a rubber stamp feel, or go back to clean lines.

3 - we really like this relief version of the logo, the one on which I'm commenting, more than the one that uses less ink. :-) Let's stick with this.

And that's all we've got. Almost there!

I have added the more rough version here #195 #196 #197 #198, the circle has the woodcut style too, just for your option.

The difference between those three logos is the size of the simbols in the middle.

Hello :)
I have uploaded new entries.
Please kindly check.
If you have something to say about this new entry, please feel free to let me know.

Thanks!

Hi,
Thanks for your info.
Sorry for my misunderstanding.
I will revise it on the next entries.

Regards,

Rb

Thanks for this. I want the other members of the team to weigh in, as well, but we are getting closer.

One thing — I think you may have misunderstood what I meant by wood cut. Wood cut printing is a way to stamp out an image. It often prints imperfectly, looking worn or rough. with an uneven thickness in the lines, and that is appealing to me, but it doesn't have the texture of wood grain. Perhaps you could search on 'wood cut' and see if that offers any inspiration.

Thanks for your great work on this!

Hi again.
I have submitted more entries based on your previous direction.

Please kindly check!

Thanks!

Hello,
Thanks for the feedback, i will make it now.

Regards,

Rb

Hi again,

Could you minimize the wood effect, make it subtle? And can you rotate the type by about 45 degrees so that Abraham Jam is not centered, but on the upper right side of the logo? Any other fonts we could look at? Legibility is key, but I would also like for the font to be classy and artful.

Dear Contest Holder,
I have updated the entries here :
#169 #170 #171 #172 #173 #174 #175 #176 #177 #178 #179 #180 #181 #182

I have made the entries in some variations of the purple color.
And also i have made the woodcut style in the logo in three different format with the rougher edges.

The bubble talk icon is changed with the Peace (Olodum) Simbol.

There are also some color variation with the neat logo format without any woodcut style. Just for your option.

So thats all for now, please kindly check!

Thanks for your time to consider it!

Regards,

Rb

Thanks for your patience! We are coordinating with lots of people offering feedback, so things move a bit slowly on this end. I'm excited to see your update.

Hello,
Are you still considering my entry?

I really want to revise this entry based on your previous feedback : " We need something a little more artsy and rougher around the edges. I wonder about removing the inner circle around the faith symbols and making those symbols a bit bigger, and changing the speech bubble on the left to a peace sign (the round kind, not the two-finger kind), and could the whole thing be a bit rougher in terms of the lines? As though it were a wood cut? "

But i will not be able to submit the revisioned entry, to show it to you cause i'm not the 1st ranked designer.

I tell you this, if you give me a chance to show you the update of design, and you can review it. And if you dont like it, you can remove me wherever you like.

Thanks for your time.

Hello again,
I will be back to make it by tomorrow, cause here in my country is already late midnight.

Have a great day there!

Regards,

Rb

Hello :)
In this phase only 1st ranked designer will be able to submit more entry.
I will be very happy to make it, but you have to move me to the 1st ranking position so i can update my entries.

Thanks!

If so, here are some thoughts:

Could we go back to one color? Maybe the purple...? We like this a lot, but it feels a little too 'clean'. A bit corporate, like a Starbucks cup. We need something a little more artsy and rougher around the edges. I wonder about removing the inner circle around the faith symbols and making those symbols a bit bigger, and changing the speech bubble on the left to a peace sign (the round kind, not the two-finger kind), and could the whole thing be a bit rougher in terms of the lines? As though it were a wood cut?

Hi Rem-brand - I'm still trying to figure out how logo tournament works. Are we still allowed to revise together?

Hello,
Thanks for the rank.
If you need something to ask for improving this entry, i will be very happy to do it.

Thanks!