A Mural for MeLogo Design Contest

Entry 3 & 5 are not very readable to me. I don't like the pastel palette. Entry # 4 is too cutesy.

I take that back. Entry #4 is growing on me. I would make the font less colorful- make the color serious, deep, not black, but deeper color. It is busy, so maybe if we cut out the second butterfly and less flowers, and also the color of the flowers needs to change.... I think too colorful. If we can tone down the colors, and also fewer elements. I like the font. I like the flow, and the tag line incorporation.

Hello, here's entry #4 with color changes, colors toned down. Any other changes welcomed.

Here's

(This comment references Entry #6)

Here's entry #4 with color changes, minus the butterflies.

(This comment references Entry #7)

Here's design #5 with color changes and more readable font treatment.

(This comment references Entry #8)