Can we see a red front door and windows "glowing gold" vs black and can we see what it looks like without a solid black line across the bottom of the house and also gradient on the red words?
Maybe a little to much space between the house and Y.....also can we see the house more as a "stick" house without being solid black perhaps with a red front door. also could you add some gradient to the words "to call"?
love the words on this one...would like to see house the size of #37 with no rainbow. Move the house up one click to give room between Y and house. Can I also see house as more of an outline (with window) vs solid color
You see in 30 how the house in tucked into the wording thats how I would like to see this house. Also want the yellow brick road to look like a brick laid path. Then let me see with and without the rainbow please.
Ok, if you bring the house up and nestle it between the "home" and "your" (might have to move home over a little). Maybe stove pipe on the left of house. The rainbow is cute but it would have to be skinnier and more playful. Once the house is raised the brick road could be bigger coming from front and then tapper down and around. In this version I feel there is too much dead space between the house and the words.
Yes, getting there! Can the house move up a little and have the end of the roof line between the "H" and the "Y"? maybe put the stove pipe on the other side. Then maybe the road can twist a little on the left as well when it comes out of the house. It is looking SO good!
I like the size of the house in this one and the "sparkle. Not sold on the font.... Maybe try to not capitalize all of Home-Your-Own that might help. I feel I need more whimsical not wonky... With the house on the other side can the brick road come from the door and then wrap around the words and fade off to the back like in the first one? But want to for sure keep the tag line.
I'm loving this....I think the font could be a little more "whimsical" for lack of a better term...playful perhaps.. without losing the readability (not sure that's a word but hopefully you get the gist of what I'm trying to say) :)
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LOVE the red door!!!!!
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