Here are my submissions #12, #13, #14, #15 ... Hopefully pleased. Please feel free to contact me for any requests. And please let me know if you need any changes/modification on my entries. Thank you!
Hello, Thank you for the submissions. The Montecito CA zip code of 93108 is an area with Mountains and Beaches, Magnificent Estates and small 2 unit condominiums. The tenants, buyers and sellers are fans of the natural beauty of the area and the freedoms of living in an association. The look of #15 is my favorite. The tag line is best left out. Perhaps a mountain motif where the arc is above the birds will resonate with Montecito. Please feel free to go beyond the blue green preference I began with and think of the font, colors and basic look as having choices more on the luxury side of options.
You are one of my top five! Thank you. Please continue with revisions and have fun! The palm trees and ocean are great for Montecito. A touch of Mountain would be nice. Please try a richer font type. I appreciate your creativity. Best, George
Good Work! Both are interesting. The larger visual imprint of #30 is my favorite right now. Please try it with the wave line of #29 below the text with '.com' at the end of the wave, i.e. it looks like a 'hotlink' line under the text. The '.com' font color would match the wave color. Thank You, G
Thank you, I like 57 very much. The feedback I'm getting is to go simple. Please try a version of #57 with the 93108condo text and underlining swoosh.com with the palm trees at either end and the mountains above. The rooflines / houses are no longer a part of the picture. Another way to describe the revision is to take the house out of the left side graphic and move it to straddle the '93108condo' text line/swoosh. If # 12's 3rd roof line in the middle could replace the lower mountain peak it might be a better representation of condominium associations. Good job!