#31 I like the stars coming out - can you make them solid without white center? Adjust the a to be simpler. I like the use of the color but with the star below it its too much.
hello, I've revised my entry number # 31 without any white in the center of the star comes out. be a solid color as you requested. and for entry # 32, May I have a rainbow color specifications you mean
#32 - sorry for not being very clear with the "Rainbow" comment. I think the shape of the swishes make it look like a rainbor and would prefer that it not look a rainbow.
#32 could you put another leg on the star near the R so it actually looks like an A and completes the star?
#33 I like the solid stars better - would like to see more contemporary stars. The "A" is still has too many design elements to it. Remove the star below the "A" and play with the yellow section of the "A" so it doesn't look like a person with outstretched arms. Make the tagline a dark deep blue that matches the 7 I would like to see the word "Service" in yellow.
Thanks for allowing me to offer so much direction. I like your eye for design!
Could I a see number 38 with some more variations (but leave that one the way it is for now) Please use the Light to dark blue effect that you have in #32 on #38 on the blue letters and change the "Turn Every Customer into a Fan" into real dark blue to match the bottom of the darkest blue in the letters.
Another variation I would like to see after the changes above - change the orange star and the blue star at the end of the swish to a more contemporaty star that isn't so "straight and even"
And remember - most designers have not noted this but I need to see it in black and white in addition to color...perhaps we do that after I select your design. Not sure.
I really like your creativity and you really have an eye for design. #40 Is the closest to what I am looking for. I love the blue graduation. I realize #40 goes from top to bottom dark to light and that is what I think I want. The letters appear to have a small outline in dark blue where as the letters in #32 do not. Can you make the letters in #40 with no dark blue outline like the letters in #32?
Also, I want the color to show in the "Turn Every Customer into a FAN" and perhaps my request for dark blue was too dark. I would rather it look like the mid range of blue instead of close to black.
#38 I would like to see that logo with blue letters for "Turn Every Customer inso a FAN" with Fan highlighted somehow...bolder maybe or a different color?
#40 is by far my favorite and just needs a few more tweaks. I love the shaded blue (dark to light from top to bottom) but still need the "Turn Every Customer into a FAN to pop more and the word FAN has to stand out more.
In #42 I like the way the "Turn Every Customer into a FAN" shows up better.
It appears that a number of your designs have been removed so I cannot offer feedback on them. Please repost them
#40 I still would like to see the variations I mentioned above. I would also like to see a varation with the star at the end of the swish a little bigger so that it still look like a star when we shrink the logo down smaller.
#43 was voted by many of my colleages as their favorite and I would like to see that posted again
Entry # 43 I accidentally delete it, because it is considered similar to the concept Danez, using STAR as a substitute carakter "A ". If you want to upload my return, how to handle cases that will be on the claim by Danez.
I sent a note to appeal the removal of your designs. I hope we can reinstate #42...It is still my favorite.
In the meantime, let's try a combination of what you have above.
In #116, I love the stars and the swish. Please continue the stars following the swish like you did in #115. I need to have 7 stars. You can try the stars in an arch above and below. You can follow the lines you have in the swish on #91 too.
I prefer the stand alone stars in #115 as opposed to the encased stars in #104.
I do not like the star in the middle of the A like in #115
In the tagline, I would prefer a little bit bolder letters so it can be easily read at a distance. Perhaps make it light to dark left to right like the light blue to dark blue is in 7Star top to bottom.
#116 - let's see what that basic design would look like if you had no stars at the end of the swish and added 7 stars in a staight line under the tag line and another variation with 7 stars in a row between Service and the tagline. Those stars need to all be the same size - like in a rating scale we see here in the states.
thank you for your attention. I am happy working on a logo design for you. I've uploaded again four designs with different variations and 2 of them as you requested. please in return correction
Dear Azkha - I have requested advice and have the following update.
I asked how we could get your logo #38 reinstated and was told that the other designer with a star in place of an A has to agree to split the prize with you. I asked him if he would agree and he said yes. Here are my requests and his comments.
Please let me know if you are agree to this and we can proceed. If so, please send Danez a statement that you agree via private message.
I have asked for an extension to assure that we have the best logos to compare.
thanks, Ruby
March 31st, 2011, 12:34am Dear Danez, , I really like your contemporary style and that you are in the US. I have had so many designs that are great but the top one so far is one that has been removed from the contest.
I liked the concept of the 'A' as a star. I like the idea but I did not like the design. I see another designer had a similar idea before I ranked your designs. I really like his design with the star 'A'. Would you be open to a split prize with the other designer if he also accepts?
I am not sure what will happen in the last few hours, but would like to consider that as an option. Thanks for considering.
Thanks in advance for your response.
Your fan, Ruby
March 31st, 2011, 2:34am Hi.. Ruby.. have you ask him? if you choose him as a winner, you have to tell him that he must split the prize with me.. (50%) ,(but if he does not become a winner with my idea, I wanted him to retract his work.) and please tell him if he agrees with my offer, tell him that he should send me a statement that he agreed with me via private message becouse if he break the deal i will take him to logo court, even when he has a winner. ( i will wait his response, so i can let him to put back his design)
thank you have appreciated my idea. Danez
7StarService United States Valued Client Joined: February 2011 March 31st, 2011, 11:14pm Sorry for the delay Danez. I am traveling and din't see your response until now.
Thank you for your response!
I will share your specifications listed above and keep you posted. I will also share this dialogue with the moderator who has been helpful in this situation.
I have requested an extension to make sure we resolve this before moving forward.
thanks for being open to the idea! Let's hope he agrees and then we all win!
I've read a message from you, but there is little to harm me if I am selected as a winner. why do I only get 50% and 50% Danez, while I who become winners and STAR, which I make is more "think out of the box ". indeed he is more used to using a star instead of the letter "A ". why should draw prize distribution. If I may offer to you, maybe 70-30 or 60-40.
how? Could you reconsider. But if not, what can make me leave everything to you as my client.
Thanks Azkha. I don't get to choose the percentage. I placed you in first because I want the design that has been removed. If that is not available, I may choose another design that is not yours.
The only way we can get your design #38 back in the competition is for you to agree to share the prize with him if it is chosen.
I wish there was another option but it is out of my control.
If you agree, please send a note to Danez and then you can post your old design. :-)
Yeah! I love that design. I would also like to see design #226 with the swish going the other direction like in #135. Leave the colors the same as #226 though. Thanks!
Thanks for your patience Azkha. I extended the competition so I could have my colleagues verify my choice. I was attending a conference the last 3 days and was able to show the designs to my peers who help validate my choice. They loved your design as much as I did. They gave me great input and have a few tweaks in your design and then I will choose you. Here are the tweaks.
#227 We decided that the tagline needs to be lower and upper case. You changed some of the others but not this one. Please make it read like this Turn Every Customer Into a FAN.
I would like to see the tagline all dark blue and then also another version with the shading as is.
The word SERVICE needs to be either darker or bolder to show up better against the white background.
Is there a place on the web where I can confirm that is the right orange I want? Please tell me what color it is so I can match it to my favorite.
Ok, I'll follow you enter from. and now please see my latest entry, with the tagline using uppercase and lowercase letters. and also the color with a dark blue version and the version of the gradations of light to dark blue.
besides, I also change the color of orange is more daring.
if still there I need to change, please confirm again. I will update for you ...
Good morning! I am not sure where you are in Indonesia but I hope the earthquake did not cause you any harm.
I love the new orange and and so thankful for your ability to follow directions. I would like to see one more variation in the tagline in our time left if possible.
#257 the tagline blue starts too light and in #256 the tagline is too dark.
Please make a a tagline with the blue that is about the middle of the seven so it isn't too ligt and isnt' too dark. I like it all the same color.