I think this is pretty good... i don't really care for the crown... it would be great to see it without the crown... also it would be nice to see one with out the tag line as well... im debating if i want the tag line to be used or not... also when u give me one with out the tag line, with out the crown, also drop the swirl at bottom just for a peek at how that looks as well... i know it would be basic, but might be best for flyer use