I like you bullet cutting throught the card. Can you change the card from a "price tag" shape to a "playing card" (rectangle) shape.
Possibly other cards with a single spade on it. I would not want any hearts, diamonds, or clubs on the playing card. Is there some other emblems / symbols you can use too?
I like Entry #48 with "Precision" in italics / slanted.
Can you come up with another logo, emblem, symbol to place in front, above, or around "610 PRECISION"? I do not want: targets, bullets, police shields.
Can you suggest other color combinations besides red, black, and gray?