401(k) Reconnaissance (or 401k Recon)Logo Design Contest

ok, here is my entry. Turned out to be more labor intensive than i thought but i really like the result. I have tried to really innovate with an original mark and build in a 3d aspect. feedback welcome.

(This comment references Entry #114)

i can build in a tagline if needed.

This really awesome and creative. Actually, it is too awesome. I love it, but it is over the top for my site. The swoosh as an airplane trail is great. The big brackets around the 4 have wonderful depth. It's just too much. Can you try toning it down?

thanks for the great feedback. I have toned this design down significantly. I can further simplify it if you believe it is headed to your top pick.

(This comment references Entry #272)

Thanks. It's not going to work. I really want it to work because 114 is really amzaing, but it just doesn't :(
Sorry. Thanks for the effort.