I really like the figure and the lettering in #13 & #14. Could you try something different with the progressive morphing, maybe not the lighter images but something to demonstrate motion. Also, can we try the figure in a box or circle, maybe with a polished look, reflection, or somewhat 3D? Nice Start!
Some more comments on the figure: Perhaps the transition would seem smoother if the progressive figures overlapped more (see#10 for example). Can we make the figure appear to be making more of a leaping movement as opposed to running (i.e. more of an upward motion).
I haven't seen any revisions from you based on my previous 2 comments, and your designs have dropped down a little in my rankings. I am hoping to see an effort to move up from 6th place before the initial phase runs out.