Hey Daniel, you are back in the hunt! Nice submission #24. "LEAP" needs to be all caps. Can you stretch the 'Life Empowerment Action plan" to be as wide as the top line, maybe a point size larger. And let's try it without the shadow figure or the stars. (Everyone keeps submitting things with stars! What's up with stars?)
Anyway, thanks for the revisions. I look forward to seeing your next rendition.