Hello, welcome to my contest! I appreciate your design, however I don't want to explore the initials of the business, since bo is short for something else (body odor) lol
Anyway, I like the idea of a simple line, that's the right thinking, for me less is more. I have some nice designs on the contest already, but they are failing a bit on simplicity...
Please try again, looking forward to receiving your new designs, Thank you!