Dr. Tuğrul Saygı – Personal Branding LogoLogo Design Contest

Thank you, if all good, please end the contest and pick a winner. So I can provide the final files

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Jefry

The slogan is better now. The colour is ok. Lines are a good fit.

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Base on entry #231, update proposal using support Turkish character font for slogan, let me know your thoughts.

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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #398, let me know your thoughts.

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Jefry

Can you add lines to the left and right sides? It's very hard to read Horlama Tedavisi. Maybe a bit bigger

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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #396 and #397, let me know your thoughts.

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Jefry

Thank you. I added some comments about them.

Please change the tagline from “HORLAMA TEDAVISI” to “HORLAMA TEDAVİSİ” with the correct Turkish characters.

Make sure the font you use fully supports Turkish diacritics (ğ, ı, İ, ö, ü, ş).

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Thank you for the updated version. We’d like to request a few refinements to address both technical and visual points:

Turkish Character Support

The current font seems not to fully support Turkish characters — for example, the dotted “i” in “Tedavisi” is not displaying correctly.

Please use a font that fully supports Turkish diacritics (ğ, ı, İ, ö, ü, ş) while keeping a clean and professional appearance.

Figure Shape

The lying figure’s body looks slightly too wide/heavy, which creates an unbalanced visual weight.

Please make the silhouette slimmer and more streamlined for a softer, more elegant look.

Typography Style

Consider using a sharper, more defined font style (e.g., Sora, Avenir Next, Lato, Source Sans Pro) to give the logo a stronger, more corporate feel.

Maintain a consistent weight for “Dr. Tuğrul Saygı” to ensure balance.

Tagline Readability

Slightly darken the “HORLAMA TEDAVİSİ” color and/or increase its font weight to improve legibility on smaller screens.

Please keep the overall concept, proportions, and color harmony the same while applying these adjustments.

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Thanks for feedback, update proposal
- #366 and #367 = Avenir
- #368 and #369 = Source Sans Pro
- #370 and #371 = Lato
- #372 and #373 = Manrope
all with and without "Zzz", let me know your thoughts.

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Jefry

We like the overall concept and how it clearly communicates the sleep/snoring theme. However, we’d like to make some adjustments to improve the logo’s corporate feel, readability, and balance.

Revision Requests:

Typography

Please try a more corporate and professional-looking font family (e.g., Avenir Next, Source Sans Pro, Lato, Sora, Manrope, or similar).

Keep “Dr. Tuğrul Saygı” in Regular/SemiBold weight for a clean hierarchy.

For “HORLAMA TEDAVİSİ”, use Medium weight with slightly increased letter spacing (+10–15 tracking) for better readability.

Tagline Readability

Increase the contrast of “HORLAMA TEDAVİSİ” by using a slightly darker tone.

Remove the horizontal lines on both sides of the tagline for a cleaner look, especially on small screens.

Icon Adjustments

Increase the stroke weight of the face, moon, and wave by around 15–20% so they remain visible at smaller sizes.

Consider making the “Zzz” slightly larger for better visibility, or remove it entirely for a cleaner, more corporate appearance.

Proportions & Layout

Reduce the overall height of the icon by around 10–15% to balance it better with the text.

Ensure the icon and text spacing feels visually unified and works well in both stacked and horizontal formats.

These changes will help the logo maintain clarity and professionalism across all applications, including mobile, print, and small-scale use.

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Thank you.

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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #230 #231 #232 #233 #234 and #235, let me know your thoughts.

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Jefry

Thank you for this design — it’s clean, elegant, and reflects the core idea of sleep. However, we’d love to enhance the “nighttime feeling” a bit more.

Here are a few suggestions:

The current arc above the head doesn’t clearly read as a moon. Perhaps shaping it more like a crescent moon or adding a few minimalist stars would help communicate the nighttime theme better.

The “Zzz” is clear, but it may appear too playful. We’re open to replacing it with stars or simplifying it to a single “Z” if you think it looks more refined.

Please ensure that the horizontal lines on both sides of “HORLAMA TEDAVİSİ” are visually balanced — the right line currently seems slightly longer.

Overall, the composition is strong, and we think this version is very close to being finalized with a few small adjustments. Looking forward to your revision!

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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #222, for the lines before and after Horlama Tedavisi, I make sure those in same size and length.

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Jefry

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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #221, for the lines before and after Horlama Tedavisi, I make sure those in same size and length.

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Jefry

Thank you for addressing our previous feedback. The silhouette is now much more abstract and professional, which we appreciate.

A few suggestions for refinement:
– You may consider softening the curve of the forehead and chin to make the figure appear even more neutral and genderless.
– The star/shine elements are nice, but could be simplified slightly to maintain a clean medical tone.
– Please double-check the symmetry of the horizontal lines beside “HORLAMA TEDAVİSİ” — the right line appears slightly longer.

This version is very close to what we envisioned. Thank you for your thoughtful iteration.

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Thanks for feedback, and ratings, update proposal #190 #191 #192 #193 and #194, let me know your thoughts.

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Jefry

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Thank you very much for your feedback. I would love to revise and improve my proposal, but unfortunately, the contest has a limit on the number of entries I can submit. That limit can only be lifted if one of my designs is rated. At the moment, I’ve reached my entry quota, so I won’t be able to submit a new version unless one of my existing entries receives a rating.

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Jefry

We like the typography and the color palette – they fit perfectly with our brand.
However, we feel that the sleeping figures create an unintended sexualized perception and are too detailed for a medical logo.
Could we explore a more abstract, professional icon, such as a single-line face profile, airway/nose element, or even a TS monogram?
Also, simplifying the extra details (stars and “Zzz”) would make it more professional and mobile-friendly.

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However, we feel that the sleeping figures create an unintended sexualized perception and are too detailed for a medical logo.
Could we explore a more abstract, professional icon, such as a single-line face profile, airway/nose element, or even a TS monogram?
Also, simplifying the extra details (stars and “Zzz”) would make it more professional and mobile-friendly.

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I submitted several new design proposals, I am open to receiving feedback. Each designer has a limit for submitting new proposals, if you are interested in my design, you can give a rank. So I can keep updating and developing my proposals. Your feedback and ranking really helped develop my proposal in your contest.

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Jefry