We like the clean and professional look of this version — it’s well-balanced and fits the medical sector. We’d like to request a few refinements to strengthen the message and ensure better readability across all uses.
Revision Requests:
Add “Zzz” Element
Add a minimal “Zzz” above the head silhouette to emphasize the sleep/snoring theme.
Keep it subtle and consistent with the current color palette and style.
Typography Consistency
Please prepare two variations for “Dr. Tuğrul Saygı”:
A) All text in bold weight.
B) All text in regular/normal weight.
This will help us decide which version feels more professional and cohesive.
Tagline Readability
Slightly darken the “HORLAMA TEDAVİSİ” color and/or increase the font weight to improve readability on smaller screens.
Please keep the icon size, proportions, and colors the same in both variations.
Great direction overall. To push it to a more premium, medical look, could you please explore these updates:
Typography & Hierarchy
Use one type family with two weights (e.g., Regular/Medium for “Dr. Tuğrul”, SemiBold/Bold for “Saygı”).
Make “HORLAMA TEDAVİSİ” 70–75% of the main line’s cap height, weight Medium, with tracking +40 to +80 for better legibility.
Ensure perfect kerning for Turkish diacritics (ğ, ı, ş).
Icon Refinement
Please remove the “Zzz”. It feels a bit playful; we need a more clinical/premium tone.
Simplify the face silhouette (flat, minimal) so it reads clearly at small sizes.
Try three routes and show 1–2 options per route:
A) Minimal face profile + subtle airflow wave
B) “TS” monogram integrating a breathing/airway curve
C) Shield shape with an airway curve for a “protection” feel
Keep stroke thickness consistent across the mark.
Color
Deepen the primary teal/blue (e.g., #0E6776 / #0F3954) and keep a brighter turquoise accent (#19B8C8 / #22C1D3).
Provide monochrome versions too.
Lockups
Please prepare a horizontal lockup with the icon on the left and the text on the right.
Also include a stacked version (icon on top, text below).
Test small sizes (24–32 px) to ensure legibility.
Deliverables: SVG, PDF, PNG (@1x/@2x), color/mono, dark/light backgrounds, plus social/avatar and favicon-ready variants.
Thanks a lot—excited to see the refined directions!
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Any feedback appreciated.
With regards,
MB
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Make sure the font you use fully supports Turkish diacritics (ğ, ı, İ, ö, ü, ş).
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Revision Requests:
Add “Zzz” Element
Add a minimal “Zzz” above the head silhouette to emphasize the sleep/snoring theme.
Keep it subtle and consistent with the current color palette and style.
Typography Consistency
Please prepare two variations for “Dr. Tuğrul Saygı”:
A) All text in bold weight.
B) All text in regular/normal weight.
This will help us decide which version feels more professional and cohesive.
Tagline Readability
Slightly darken the “HORLAMA TEDAVİSİ” color and/or increase the font weight to improve readability on smaller screens.
Please keep the icon size, proportions, and colors the same in both variations.
Thanks,
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Typography & Hierarchy
Use one type family with two weights (e.g., Regular/Medium for “Dr. Tuğrul”, SemiBold/Bold for “Saygı”).
Make “HORLAMA TEDAVİSİ” 70–75% of the main line’s cap height, weight Medium, with tracking +40 to +80 for better legibility.
Ensure perfect kerning for Turkish diacritics (ğ, ı, ş).
Icon Refinement
Please remove the “Zzz”. It feels a bit playful; we need a more clinical/premium tone.
Simplify the face silhouette (flat, minimal) so it reads clearly at small sizes.
Try three routes and show 1–2 options per route:
A) Minimal face profile + subtle airflow wave
B) “TS” monogram integrating a breathing/airway curve
C) Shield shape with an airway curve for a “protection” feel
Keep stroke thickness consistent across the mark.
Color
Deepen the primary teal/blue (e.g., #0E6776 / #0F3954) and keep a brighter turquoise accent (#19B8C8 / #22C1D3).
Provide monochrome versions too.
Lockups
Please prepare a horizontal lockup with the icon on the left and the text on the right.
Also include a stacked version (icon on top, text below).
Test small sizes (24–32 px) to ensure legibility.
Deliverables: SVG, PDF, PNG (@1x/@2x), color/mono, dark/light backgrounds, plus social/avatar and favicon-ready variants.
Thanks a lot—excited to see the refined directions!
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Any feedback or suggestions appreciated.
With regards,
MB
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Just added some new revisions.
Any feedback appreciated.
With regards,
MB
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Any feedback appreciated.
With regards,
MB