We like the modern and minimal style of this design, but currently, it gives more of a dental or oral health impression rather than directly representing snoring or sleep treatment. We’d like to make some changes to better align the logo with the brand’s core focus.
Revision Requests:
Icon Concept
Replace the current standing figure with a form that suggests sleep, breathing, or airflow.
A side profile of a face with a flowing wave or airflow line could work well to convey the snoring/sleep concept.
Keep the overall style minimal and modern, avoiding excessive detail.
Wave Element
The wave should feel more like a soft airflow — smooth and harmonious — rather than a dental tool or brush stroke.
Integrate the wave naturally with the new figure or face profile.
Typography
Maintain the current strong and modern font style, but slightly increase the contrast for “HORLAMA TEDAVİSİ” to improve legibility.
Reduce the gap between the main name and the tagline for a more compact look.
Color Palette
Keep the current navy + turquoise combination, but feel free to adjust tones slightly if needed for better visual harmony.
We’d like to see 2–3 variations based on these updates so we can compare.
Please try a slightly more distinctive font for “Dr. Tuğrul Saygı” while keeping it professional and easy to read.
Increase the legibility of the “HORLAMA TEDAVİSİ” text by using a slightly bolder weight or increasing the letter spacing.
TS Monogram & Face Silhouette:
Keep the face silhouette minimal so that it doesn’t overpower the “TS” letters.
Ensure the face integrates smoothly into the letters without reducing overall readability.
Optionally, test a forward-facing silhouette for a sense of “progress and solution.”
Color Palette:
Deepen the blue tone for more trust and professionalism.
Make the turquoise tone slightly more vibrant for energy and freshness.
Optionally, experiment with a subtle gradient to add a modern touch.
Icon & Text Relationship:
Balance the size ratio between the icon and the text so neither element feels overpowering.
Additional Layout Request:
Please prepare one version where the icon is placed on the left and the text is placed on the right for horizontal usage scenarios.
Optional Minimal Element:
If possible, try a subtle sleep or breathing element (like a small wave shape) integrated into the design — but keep it very minimal so the logo remains clean.
Thanks in advance — looking forward to seeing the updated versions.
We really like the overall concept — especially the way the “TS” monogram integrates a facial profile and airway illustration. It’s creative, meaningful, and clearly connected to the field of snoring treatment. Well done!
The color transition is also very effective and consistent with our website brand colors.
We have a few small suggestions to refine the design even further:
Airflow graphic: It’s elegant, but the inner swirl could be simplified slightly to make it more modern and reduce visual complexity at smaller sizes.
TS Balance: Consider tightening the integration of the face with the “S” so it feels a bit more unified as a monogram.
Font Matching: The current typography works well, but feel free to explore a slightly more distinctive sans-serif font if you'd like to present options.
Thank you again — this is a very strong direction.
Comment Activity
Ok
Make sure the font you use fully supports Turkish diacritics (ğ, ı, İ, ö, ü, ş).
Also "Horlama Tedavisi" is too small for mobile devices
Make sure the font you use fully supports Turkish diacritics (ğ, ı, İ, ö, ü, ş).
Also, "Horlama Tedavisi" is too small for mobile devices
Make sure the font you use fully supports Turkish diacritics (ğ, ı, İ, ö, ü, ş).
Also "Horlama Tedavisi" is too small for mobile devices
Make sure the font you use fully supports Turkish diacritics (ğ, ı, İ, ö, ü, ş).
Make sure the font you use fully supports Turkish diacritics (ğ, ı, İ, ö, ü, ş).
Make sure the font you use fully supports Turkish diacritics (ğ, ı, İ, ö, ü, ş).
ok i will make some changes to my design
regards
Doni
Revision Requests:
Icon Concept
Replace the current standing figure with a form that suggests sleep, breathing, or airflow.
A side profile of a face with a flowing wave or airflow line could work well to convey the snoring/sleep concept.
Keep the overall style minimal and modern, avoiding excessive detail.
Wave Element
The wave should feel more like a soft airflow — smooth and harmonious — rather than a dental tool or brush stroke.
Integrate the wave naturally with the new figure or face profile.
Typography
Maintain the current strong and modern font style, but slightly increase the contrast for “HORLAMA TEDAVİSİ” to improve legibility.
Reduce the gap between the main name and the tagline for a more compact look.
Color Palette
Keep the current navy + turquoise combination, but feel free to adjust tones slightly if needed for better visual harmony.
We’d like to see 2–3 variations based on these updates so we can compare.
Okay, I will follow your instructions and try some variations in the design.
Regards
Doni
Please try a slightly more distinctive font for “Dr. Tuğrul Saygı” while keeping it professional and easy to read.
Increase the legibility of the “HORLAMA TEDAVİSİ” text by using a slightly bolder weight or increasing the letter spacing.
TS Monogram & Face Silhouette:
Keep the face silhouette minimal so that it doesn’t overpower the “TS” letters.
Ensure the face integrates smoothly into the letters without reducing overall readability.
Optionally, test a forward-facing silhouette for a sense of “progress and solution.”
Color Palette:
Deepen the blue tone for more trust and professionalism.
Make the turquoise tone slightly more vibrant for energy and freshness.
Optionally, experiment with a subtle gradient to add a modern touch.
Icon & Text Relationship:
Balance the size ratio between the icon and the text so neither element feels overpowering.
Additional Layout Request:
Please prepare one version where the icon is placed on the left and the text is placed on the right for horizontal usage scenarios.
Optional Minimal Element:
If possible, try a subtle sleep or breathing element (like a small wave shape) integrated into the design — but keep it very minimal so the logo remains clean.
Thanks in advance — looking forward to seeing the updated versions.
ok i will do some revisions on this design
regards
Doni
The color transition is also very effective and consistent with our website brand colors.
We have a few small suggestions to refine the design even further:
Airflow graphic: It’s elegant, but the inner swirl could be simplified slightly to make it more modern and reduce visual complexity at smaller sizes.
TS Balance: Consider tightening the integration of the face with the “S” so it feels a bit more unified as a monogram.
Font Matching: The current typography works well, but feel free to explore a slightly more distinctive sans-serif font if you'd like to present options.
Thank you again — this is a very strong direction.