Cafè BerninaLogo Design Contest

thanks daniel. we like it. just a question... why is the space between the N and the A of Bernina wider than the other letters?

Hi there!

Thanks for the feedback.

What do you think of this version?

let me know if you have any comments.

Greetings. Daniel

If it is possibile to centre the two inscriptions, that would be perfect. Cafè in the middle and Bernna in the middle. Thanks, the partner of Fabrizio.

Fantastic. We opted for this change as we thought it was weird to put "2021" fr a new company.

Please, keep the spaces between the letters of the words the same everywhere. Then just move the thick red stripe accordingly in the middle between the two words.... it doesn't matter where it lands :-)

New change #187.
I was checking the spaces and I left them symmetrically so that it visually looks good.

I await your comments to see what you think.

Greetings. Daniel!

Hi Daniel, sorry to bother you one last time. We would like you to try this one last change:

- leave the word café above
- move the word Bernina below the red stripe (the one with the cross and keys
- move up the red stripe right in the middle proportionally between the two words cafe and bernina. of course this would mean to move the red stripe above the middle. (the thin red strip would of course disappear. I think there was a similar version in the early version of the logo.... where the words cafe and bernina were separated.

Thank you.

Thank you Daniel. Could we see just a version without the thin red stripe where the "dal 2021" was? Please. Thank you.

Hello good Morning!

Thank you for your comments.

Here is the required change for your review.

I remain attentive to your comments.


Greetings. Daniel ;)

Great Daniel. One last touch... Can you delete the writing "DAL 2021" and just leave a red line, please?

Thank you for your comments.
Don't worry, the idea is to come up with the correct design for you.

I hope I have understood well.
Anyway, any comments or suggestions, please let me know.

Greetings. Daniel

Hello Frabizio!

Thank you for your comments.

I am sending the new proposals with the change in the summit and the corresponding spaces, for your review #179 #180 #181.
I understand its changes and it is really visually improving that part.

I hope you are good.

Remember, any comments or suggestions, please let me know.
It will be a pleasure.

Greetings. Daniel

Great!!
thank you very much.

Great news.

Here are the new presentations with the changes #173 #174 #175.

I hope they are well.

I'll stay tuned to your comments.

Greetings. Daniel

Thank you, I left you a private message (so i could upload the last change we would like). We just need to fix the top of the ridge (see private message), and possibly change it in all three versions ranked.... after that we will make a decision :-) Thank you for your great work.

new change

thank you Daniel. You did what we asked, thank you. Maybe, would it be possible to use the same exact shape of scribble like the one on the left, instead of the one you did?

Hi Fabrizio.

Great thank you very much

Please review these options, see what you think #170 #171.
I hope it's all okay.

Sincerely. Daniel

Hey Daniel, let us try to just add on the right side of the mountain a small white scribble like the older version, please (see markup).

Thank you, all the best.

Fabrizio

Hello!!
Thank you for your comments.

Please check out these new options with some adjustments to the mountain silhouette #165 #166 #167 #168 #169. Hope you like.

Remember, any other comments or suggestions, please let me know.
It will be a pleasure.

Greetings. Daniel

Dear Daniel,

thank you for your work, We love it.

We would like to ask you to make some adjustments to the mountain.

- Do you think it would be possible to make the "double-summit" somehow more evident?
- if you look at the picture, you see how the right side of the mountain is always in the shade (north face). Do you think it would be possible to create this differentiation? Without adding new colours. We like the way you were able to depict the characteristics of the mountain basically with three brushstrokes.
- we basically want to make the mountain as recognisable as possible without having to add too many details (e.g. maybe if you look at the picture of the Piz Bernina you can see how it is a slightly steeper mountain on the sides than what you depicted now...)

we know we still havee some time so that is why we just want to see where we can push the likeliness of the mountain within the logo.

Thank you david.

Hi how are you?
I hope that very good.

Thank you very much for keeping my design in your ranking.

Remember, any other comments or suggestions, please let me know.
It will be a pleasure.

Greetings. Daniel. ;)

Thanks!!

here is the new proposal with the required change.
I hope you are good.

Greetings. Daniel Thank you

Ciao Daniel. Awesome. D you think you could try a version where the "tustù a pus'ciaf" part is straight instead of curved? But only this part, and not the "dal 2021".

New changes here #159 #160 #161 #162 #163

I hope I have understood well.
In any case, I will be attentive to your comments.

It is always a pleasure to serve you.

Greetings. Daniel. ;)

Hola Daniel, que tal?

The logo starts to look great. We are sorry if you keep asking to change small things, but I guess you are ok with that. :-) We are getting there closer and closer.

The following variations:
- is it possible to try to mirror the crack in the coffee bean? So that the ridge does a slightly left curve instead of a right curve (so as to try to still match a little bit the original foto of the mountain). Just a try.... :-)
- we would then like to try the following variations:
--> red stripe a little bit thicker, so as to augment the size of the two swiss symbols
--> instead of Est. 2021 we would like to try and see the following possibilities: 1) one with "dal 2021" 2) one with "tustù a Pus'ciaf" 3) "tustù a Pus'ciaf dal 2021" (we like the font you used)

Otherwise, all in all, great. We just want to see other variations.

Thanks,

CB

Hi good day.

Thank you for your comments.
Great news!

Here I send some proposals with changes and minor adjustments for your review #155 #156 #157 #158.

I hope you like them. Any other comments or suggestions please let me know.

All the best. Daniel

Hola Daniel . Great. We are almost there. Let us try with the following changes:
- Lower the red stripe so as to allow the entire name of the company to fit together (like you did with the version where the mountain was bigger). There will be a new small space under the coffee bean. we thought we could add "Est. 2021"... if you have another idea, just shoot :-)
- the outside teeth of the logo would be better in black rather than brown. Brown only for the center piece of the logo
- let us try one version with a slightly lighter brown, so as to distinguish it better from the black.
- Centerpiece: this is awesome. Just two slight modification would be great: 1)is it possible to finish off the lower part of the ridge in a way similar to the higher part of the coffee bean? (i.e. not touching the rim and finishing off pointed) 2) let's try to move the mountain slightly to the left, so as to align the ridge with the right summit (as you have noticed Piz Bernina is a mountain with two summits and the white ridge... this is what makes the mountain recognizable here in our region. The ridge summits only on the right summit and not on the main summit). If we can fix this, it will be awesome.

Thank you a lot for your work

Hi, thanks. Would it be possible to disconnect the mountain and the coffee and to give continuity to the red part. Thanks a lot for your work

Hi Fabrizio Thank you!

here are the new changes for review #148 #149 #150 #151.
I hope I have understood well.

Greetings. Daniel

the old mountain as for #110

Could you please try to use the old mountain and put the all coffee bean (with white part) behind the part in red? thanks a lot.

ps. I'm the partner of Fabrizio

Thank you for your comments.

Here are the new changes for your review #136 >> #147.

Remember, any comments or suggestions, please let me know.

Greetings. Daniel

Ciao Daniel! Awesome work. Could it be possible to try two different versions of this one? 1) reverse the colours of the mountain and the bean 2) make the bean AND the mountain brown so that from a distance it looks like a whole coffee bean, but if you look at it closer you realise it is the mountain. :-)

Hello! Thank you for the modifications. Awesome. Would it be possible to try to reverse the colours of the mountain and the coffee bean, please?

Also, could we try a version where the red stripe is connected yet it goes in front of the bean, but behind the mountain. Please.

Thank you very much!

and these versions without the texture can be used for embroidery. #131 #132 #133 #134

Hi!

Thank you for your comments.

Here are the new proposals with the changes required for review. I hope I have understood well. #127 #128 #129 #130
Anyway, any other comments or suggestions, please let me know

Greetings. Daniel

Hi! Thank you for your comments.

I will make the changes. Pleasure.

Sincerely. Daniel

Could you also try to create a version of this logo, with the color choice of your Nr. 87 (only the core: mountain and bean)?

See other comment in the other logo. :-)

Hi Daniel

We really like your concept and would like to see some variations.
We have come up with the following minor modifications:
- Enlarge the two flags in the red (so as to enlarge the keys and the cross and make it easier to use e.g. in embroidery).
- we like the way you were able to really depict the core traits of the Piz Bernina (i.e. the summit and the Biancograt...the white ridge). Do you think you could try to create a continuity from the white ridge (you can also simplify it) and the the cleft of the coffee bean (so as to try to mirror the ridge in the coffee bean). Eventually the idea is also to make it more obvious that it is a coffee bean :-D

After evaluating these changes, we can consider how to proceed.
Thank you very much for your work

Hello!! :) how are you?
I hope all is well. ☺

Thank you very much for rating my design.
I am happy to participate in your contest.

If you have any other comments or suggestions, please let me know.
It will be a pleasure to continue working.

Sincerely. Daniel.

Hi Daniel, we like your concepts and will revert to you soon. Cheers

Hello!! is a pleasure to greet you,
it's an honor to be participating in your contest.

Here I have uploaded my logo alternatives for your review #60 #61 #62 #63 #64 #65
Remember, if you have any other requirement, please let me know.
It will be a pleasure to continue working for you.

Regards. Daniel. ☺