This is almost there it's just off a little in some way. What if you took the bottom cracker off and just switched the top to a hexagon shaped graham cracker and tied in the sides some how. I like how the top half looks.
This is awesome. Can we see some micro shading at the very bottom of the hexagon the same color as the font. Like micro dots to illustrate chocolate and tie in the bigger dots up top and the font color.
Uploaded some pictures to demonstrate how the words flow into one another and on the Washington shirt how the words create the actual shape of the state of Washington.
Would like to see "A THAT" in lower case and the color could be the same as s'more (or just darker) so it's easier to see. The "O" looks a little like a toilet paper roll but love the incorporation. Maybe some dots or shading (very subtle) to help the hexagon look kind of like a graham cracker.
Love the marshmallow incorporation into the words and the hexagon. Maybe try some additional fonts too and color variations (would love to see the three s'more colors incorporated)
I'm not sure I'm loving the font for "s'more" - the "s" is throwing me off. Maybe something a little more sleek there? And what if we pushed the "a that" all the way over to the right side, keep the long line to the left of it and turn it into a simple/clean marshmallow roasting on a stick?
I love this one! Would love to see what it would look like with a light brown top and bottom layer with a dark brown/black melting chocolate. You might have to change the color of the wording to make it look good. Whatever you think looks best
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I like the possibilites with this one for sure.
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